He made the novel premium promising to make it better ... Its not ... The translation is still bad and shows no signs of improvement ... He also slowed down the story speed so that he can milk this for everything its worth.
yo, the book is quite fantastic, you did good on the character, and the background details are nice to, but what really got my attention was, DUN DA DA DAAA "the fox" books with foxes are my favorite. love you, love your book, and I can't wait for the next book or the next chapter
Insanely cliché, So Trash 2 STARSInsanely cliché, So Trash 2 STARS
I love The book so far and Am looking foward to future chapters and seeing how The MC deals with more intresting situations.
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(My Honest Review?)The MC starts off slow and his progress in Magic is minimal, But, now that I think of it, I enjoyed it. The process of the MC's, little by little improvement, until he gets stronger, is a slow and enjoyable ride. It's like when you ride a Ferris Wheel and peek outside, seeing a great view, slowly and surely unfold on your eyes. It may be because of me being Fan of a slow start, not like most of the Novels here in WN, being fast-paced and OP.(A quick summary without leaking any major spoilers)Earth is not exactly the "Earth" we know, but an Earth with a slight tweak with some new species and special people. 85 BC Earth, so yeah. Let's start with the World Building… I'm speechless. Start with Earth, and he, the MC miraculously gets transported to a place where People would learn Magic. Emery is a Human, but not really, as his Mother being *spoiler*. The Kingdom is an enemy to Emery's mother Kind and when they know his secret, they chase him, getting his Father killed, and him miraculously escaping the chase, and miraculously got transported to Magus Academy. Magus Academy is a place or Holy Land of some sort for Mages. Emery is a rare Human who had 4 Elements for him to choose from, but his talent being B, the worst talent in his class. He needs to pass the test or his memory might be erased and be transported back to Earth, but getting back means Death for him.(Summary Ends)The thing I like about this Novel is the World Building or the description the author is putting for us to see. 5 stars World Building.I see that most of the readers didn't like how slow-paced the story is, but for me, it is perfect. 5 stars Story Development.Writing Quality is 4.8 stars, because of some typos, but it will not affect your reading Tbh.Update? Waiting… as there are some personal problems the Editor is facing, so the Author can't publish the Chapter. 4.5 stars...?Character Design is 4.8. The People are flesh out fine, and you can clearly feel the emotions they want us to feel. But not that clear sometimes, or it is me just being dumb??Overall 4.8! Great Novel with a Huge Potential!*The way I see it(chapter 36) The story's MC is like an MC who will, or most of the time be an underdog. So you guys must be patient!?*Comment your thoughts? or questions?
i think it is great so far keep up the work??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Male Lead rapes the female lead, doesn’t feel sorry about it, it’s treated as “they had sex”. It’s messed up. Also, it’s free elsewhere, but after reading that, who cares? Really, is it that hard to understand that rape is bad? Also, the author constantly uses rape to point out “this character is a bad guy!” as if there’s no other way to show that; does the author have a rape fetish? Seriously, don’t read this garbage.
I deeply resonate with the mc; I just want to be rich, I never wanted to be this handsome. But the heavens are unfair! I just wanted to be some rich young master from a rich family! Once I transmigrate into a cultivation world, see how I’ll wipe the floor with your face!
Great start up untill you hit Chapter 98 and then it becomes broken and unreadable, like the author left out a bunch of stuff between chapters
Webnovel just stop trail read......**** trash novel get priority while good novel are removed...Some novel get good reviews and more views than other but they were not selected.....Idk how webnovel make selection......