I thought this story would be an ordinary reincarnation story. But, oh boy, I was immediately presented with a reincarnation+tower-like system when I kept reading the next chapter. The author provides enough suspense in this story. I just wish he didn't let this annoying woman stay with him as the story progresses.
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Latest chapter read (153) So far this is a complex novel with an equally complex MC. So if you like a simple MC and a straight forward plot this is not the novel for you.Although there is usually 1 or 2 grammar mistakes per chapter the novel itself is easy to read and understand.As for story development even though the author repeatedly stresses that the story is progressing slowly. From a reader's viewpoint the story is instead progressing very rapidly with different event occuring usually without sufficient build up.And due to the quick pacing several plot holes and inconsistencies occur. In terms of character design I feel as though the author has done a very good job in making a complex and mildly intelligent character with several personality issues.Skipping over update stability I feel as though the most glaring issue in the novel is it's World Background/ World development.This issue is mainly due to two reasons the stories pacing and the addition of other world too early in the story.First of all since the novel is only 153 chapters long at this point the 2nd issue I feel can easily be fixed as the story progress. However, the first issue namely the quick story pacing causes all three worlds to feel more like a PowerPoint slide than an actual world. Now by pacing (to make it clear) I am not criticizing the stories plot. I personally believe the plot is alright. What I am criticizing is how quickly the MC goes from one plot point to another with out sufficient build up to said event. The best example of this is how the MC went to fight the blood gang although the plot was sound, the lack of background of where the MC is, the history of the area ,why the blood gang was even in the area, and how the MC even knows the existence of the tribal area cause the entire scene to be a bit chaotic and confusing. Hopefully as the story continues the author is able to fix most of the issues of the story.
Basically digging novel and post apocalyptic bunker novel mixed into one with beast taming thrown in. Cheat is almost basically the same thing
interesting so far a unique take on the genre so it'll be interesting to see where the author takes things. keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more chapters.
I’m not really into these types of novels, and I’m not gonna read it, but on 12/5/2021, this man had a picture of JESSICA RABBIT as the cover! 5/5 just for that
Warning! before you start reading, understand that the ending of the novel may not please you, I particularly hate reading something and the ending being bad and I regret wasting time like that.But overall it is a funny novel with an interesting plot, the MC will surely give you a good laugh, and the family relationship is interesting... and the MC's golden finger is definitely.... Kappa. figure it out my dear junior.(phrase I use as an excuse for my laziness to improve my grammar)
I'm not one to write reviews and this is my first time writing one, but my goodness this is possibly the first story that I'm looking forward to updating each day. It's really good so far, keep it up author.
Nice plot.Author is writing this novel with different concept and this concept is something i really fell in love with.Very nice novel with amazing plot.Waiting for more chapters to be uploaded
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I am reading it right now. So far I am thoroughl enjoying it. Author states to be new but I can hardly tell. This is definit better than many novels on this app!
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