It sucks that it will only let me rate this 5 stars. This novel is at least 6/5. It breaks the bound of a mortal book and has become a divine one. This is my gospel. To read this novel was the reason I was birthed on this earth. Amazing, simply amazing.
MrBoness is a great writer, with an impressive ability to create great plots with great characters and masterfully develop them.Keep working bro!
I truly wish we got more chapters. I like the characters and the plot. more more more faster faster faster. 140 characters. 140 characters. 140 characters
Re reviewing. The plot gets better around ch 26. We get to know more about the other Nations and Lucas's background. The writing quality looks to be increased.
The world is interesting, with characters that draw you in deep into the plot. I'm looking forward to seeing where the author takes the story next!
hi author, I want to suggest somethingin the latest chapters, XT has some argument with Teng Qigang, now we all know TQ will contact his boss ( Cao Song). Cao song will find different way to harm / kill XT or XT's loved ones and XT will have to do much things to save them. Author, we all know this kind of story plot and it's toooooo boring ?. if it 1,2 times then it's okay but it's not good to keep repeating it. We all readers have read this kind of plot thousands of time. So I want to suggest something.why not make XT kind of Anti-hero / evil mc. He is gang leader, add some detective kind people group for him. who collects all information for him and keep him updated about new rising stars or his competitor in current scenario. so it is kind of information network for XT. Now if you make story like after XT Argus with Teng Qigang. XT will ask his information group to find all details about Teng Qigang, his background and his boss and all thing. XT will plan to destroy Cao Song and Teng Qigang before even they can do anything to XT. this kind of anti-hero feels much better than that boring same hero plot. XT will use this group to find all competitor and destory them before they even know who's is planning in background. please consider this suggestion and see if you can add it in upcoming story plot.??
Pretty boring, switches all over the place. No foreshadowing of introductions, too many plot lines occurring at the same time.Nothing much to add besides this.
this novel and story is very different from all the other novels that i read before about KINGDOM BUILDING, i really like it from all the 7 novels that they give us now this week in the Trial Read, i really believe and think it is very different, he will build a city in the future and lead the most powerful Military Units army in this world, and the hard time and the difficulty that he face to get to that day, deeply interesting plots and arcs, and look like one of the greatest story i read until now. i will really like to read and see how this story will continue. :) hope you guys will give it a try too :)
Oh, so we're in the "genes" now? The age of "assassins transmigrating" novels, "cultivation chat group/red packet server"bnovels, "transmigrating with system" novels and etcetera etcetera is over... The age of "traveling to a new world that centers on genes" is starting. Lol.Ignore that. Well, I haven't read a lot of "gene" novels out there so I'm gonna try this out (~_^)
just wow!full transparency I was only looking for a book to read as a filler story while waiting for other novels in my library to update.Instead I have found myself completely immersed into the authors story here and now find myself hoping for additional chapters every time I open the app!The pace of the story is on point, actions and reactions are realistic and the MC isn't an invincible character that will get out of every scenario unharmed.The story is unique and there is world building happening in the background that comes to light that you realize the world is so much bigger than the MC realizes I am going to have to check out the authors other novel to see if I love it just as much as this one
Pretty much the most develped story i've ever read. It's a slow, but semi-enjoyable start. If u CAN GET PAST IT, its super worth it i rekon.
My honest opinion on this story is that it's good but not the best it could be honestly it doesn't help it doesn't have as much update(for a good reason obviously)on it so it take a while before we get a new chapter it's doesn't help mc is edgey (because everyone loves edgey mcs for some reason)and it's overcomplicated in some areas when it shouldn't be and some time overused plot armor to explain things specially the reason for him to be dense and finally mc powers I say it's here moment I saw death I have a feeling I know who author using for mc Powers second I saw the shadow I know it mc just the cultivator version of shadow monarch from Solo leveling honestly I'm tried of seeing shadow monarch and Hades in story's like they are overused just like the sharingan