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Nathan is not a character you would dislike. He is very likeable and so full of himself. He is so fun to read. It's such a good story, I can't wait to uncover more!
A few mistakes here and there but overall I like the character design, story development. I hope this continues and the quality so far does not diminish.
I like the world building so far, and I think that It promise. I like the inclusion of different pov's; as we can see what the side characters think of the main character.Wish you luck on this story
An excellent novel. In modern times, cultivation is one of the best of novels. Its potential is very good. Its future is a deep story. Publishing speed is slow. I can't wait for new episodes.
i like the story from the beginning because it has a lot of potential to be great. mc is a dumb and a trusting and it is fine for me since other author tend to do it for Character development. It Started go haywire around 30+ Chapter that i was forced to drop it. suddenly killing innocent for no reason getting mad killing them and urging them to suicide. a sudden 180 degree turn around in attitude . i am not hook with the authors explanation since from the beginning he was introduced as a moraly upright person and it will take a lot for him to change like that . it was forced or the author lacked the right way to present to us readers that it does not click to me the right way and it irks me. Well according to his monologue he was told by the draconians that you gain power with contract souls . I cannot remember though it might be i have been skipping the other chapters since i am getting irritated to his stupidity or bored. Still i am putting this to library probably dropping it. reason? I am not quite sure how others see anti hero is but for me anti hero are those who still follow the HERO line but still has like a morality . it is hard to explain and there is a clear line for psychopath, psychotic or cold protagonist which i label them as Evil MC most of the time unless given an outstanding background or story execution.kudos though for very good world development and interesting way explaining the stats. there are other bad things such us being a little dumb, sudden change of mc attitude like being domineering as if he got mental issue. a little bit trusting and making very bad decisions. according to author this will improve and the product will be a cold hearted, vengeful and selfish protagonist . if that is your cup of tea i highly recommend it to you
This is a total cool OP story. i actually hate most OP stories but here the MC...let's just say I don't mind it. Anyways, the world building is very unique and the best thing in this story. It's a lot like Overlord type of setting but without the game like vibe. Just real life
The dude does not know how to spell and add punctuation, worst of all it just makes the story line harder to understand! Like come on just get a translator or something on the lines or that please dude.
Amazing story. I just love this book...one of my favorite stories. Eagerly wait for Sunday to read it. I hope Rishika will get happy ending. Keep it up ??
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A good read. Try it.For those who are not satisfied, here is a short review:Special ability is OP, with the ability to see opportunities and dangers in a 100+m radius. Even future opportunities are visible, trough the same can not be said about dangers so far. In addition not all opportunities are simple or easy to get.Story flow is very well done, very few "oh my God he is awesome" or "lets waste the readers time by having 5 random different people monologue about how awesome the MC is" moments, the few technical explanation passages are consistently short and Side-Characters which actually have a reason to be included.MC is an interesting character with a few minor flaws and not the typical suicidal lemming who is only alive because of his plot armor.World and Cultivation are logical and quite interesting so far, trough not much has already been explored.