NathanCole3387
very good, I had fun reading it. I thought it was going to be an average read but it was actually really good.
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looking forward to how the story would unfold!
Shameless review time. So, my book's awesome. And I'll tell you why. My writing quality is pretty good, errors are pretty hard to come by and my vocab is fairly varied. And overall, my sentences flow naturally and words are used in ways that suit their connotations. My use of punctuation is good but I don't tend to use colons or semi colons, not that I think anyone actually cares though lolStory development isn't something I'll talk too in depth about, but, my pacing is on the slightly faster end sometimes but that's about it.Character design, so I think the way I've made character's different to what most would do, but I don't wanna spoil so shoo and read the novel. But, in terms of characterisation, it's pretty good except I'm not sure if I want to tie philosophical themes into characters yet since that takes brain power and knowledge (was planning on making a hedonistic or egoistic character but I need to think a lil bit for that)Update stability, so, I post daily atm but I can and will take rests when I need them, so I don't burn out.World background. So, I think I'm really good at this, a lot of authors just vomit info all over you. But, I prefer to only bring up info when it's relevant, since it's easier to remember and digest that way and leaves a little bit of thinking for you to do.
Liam been the man since he asked to marry Scarlett lol
Wow one day and it’s completed
nice ending..excited for the new book
no new chapters yet? pls pls updates w/ more chapters
Favorite story…can’t wait for Leah and Rowena to get whats coming…
Please update more chapters
The first chapter drew my attention ...
I love Kylie already ...
I love girls who are dark hearted ......
loved this story. beautifully written. keep up the good work!
