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it is canopied from another novel.........
Average xianxia with OP/Special MC and splattering of face-slapping. Synopsis might mislead towards a low-key MC, who quietly accumulates power till he becomes top power - in the story MC quickly shows his power, becomes heir of the sect, no. 1 of new generation.There is no in-sect plotting, there are no young masters to offend, with elders following. While there is lots of killing, it isn't "you looked me wrong, I kill you" type. MC doesn't joins the cliche outer/inner sect, so no low-level fighting of that kind.A decent enough read.
This novel is a rewrite of Otherworldly Cultivator (My very first novel) and also Returned as Dual Cultivator With Spirit System (My third novel). For those of you who have read Dual Cultivator With Spirit System before, you may still remember Chen Li's cruel, cold-blooded, and psychotic character. I'm going to write this rewrite slowly, and I'm also going to make his character darker than before. Besides that, you may still remember Feng Xian'er's character as his main wife. In this rewrite, she will still be wise and playful but also cruel and sadistic as before.
Will give it 5 stars but...it needs a lot of work, it doesn't give me the feeling that I'm reading a novel. I'm still in the process of reading it and the chapters are very short but there is something about this writing that I can't put my finger on that just makes it seem...incomplete. Maybe someone with better critiquing abilities will be able to spot it but this novel just doesn't feel like a novel, it's somewhere between that and a journal. I plan on continuing to read it for now but these are my thoughts. I recommend readers check it out for themselves.Good luck, author, I don't like leaving bad reviews since I think everyone should give a novel a try before they bash it and especially for new novels, leaving a poor review (star wise), can be detrimental
trashy writing because it always change's the names of some character like green moth to blue moth can you make some sense? well overall plot is good
You can find the exact same novel with the name "Reader" on asadatranslations with around 100 chapters. Just for your information. As someone who read ahead I can say it is a good novel. So give it a read
I am LordMouse and I approve of this book And because my word count is not enough I will allow you puny mortals to bask in the majesty and grandeur of the great LordMouse
Simply a nice book, a good type of scific. Your chapters are long, which is good, like your writing, good character design, but would appreciate it if author updates more. Good work
I find it interesting that the man was kidnapped by a business women and not the other way around... which is cliché and the usual thing that happens in stories!!! Great way to catch the attention of readers. I love it
This story has a mc that doesn't link to being a goblin, there is no real background created, the writing is quite bad, just the addition of a better translator could make the story more enjoyable, the story has been rather haphazardly put together and I can't say if it's the world or the characters, but it just isn't good enough.On the positive side, there is a non-human mc which is quite different and interesting. So I would recommend this if the writing get corrected alot, but not at the moment.?
Loving it..definitely 100% fanatic of omegaverse.. good job author san?... keep up the good work.. i really much anticipating to see new chapter..it makes my day.. ??