MrThief
dropped by chapter 3definition of stupidity is this bookutterly boring and idiotic to extremeI do NOT recommend 140 characters 140 characters
The story is good so far and it's easy to read with no grammar mistakes from what I read (I can be wrong as English is my 2nd language) Characters are pretty good like their counterpart in the novel and game, OC characters have some development but are not too focused on them except for one who becomes RO and 5 stars in my book as I like to read the historical characters lol So far so good keep up the good work! I have a busy time in life and reading this become a part of my resting time, I even haven't searched for another book in Webnovel because of my busy time!
Translation quality: terrible. The translation quality up to chapter 40 is good, but after that it’s like a switch was flipped and now it’s closer to poorly edited MTL. At this point, the translation is so literal that it’s difficult to follow. 2/5Updating stability: solid. Even though the updates are bad, at least they’re regular. That said, they immediately released 25 chapters into their privilege tier so it could obviously be better. 4/5Story development: mixed. The cases are interesting, but outside of them the story is too bland. Everything goes right for the MC and he’s never challenged or in conflict with anything else. And while it doesn’t particularly bother me, the “China STRONK” nationalism is particularly fierce in this one. 3/5Character design: lackluster. While the criminals are interesting and there’s some gray to the morality, the characters we spend the most time with are bland and uninteresting. The romance is the same: bland. It’s also rushed and the characters involved are too perfect. 2/5World background: uninspired. Normally, I find the nationalism inherent in Chinese novels intriguing, because their take on foreign countries as filtered through the state media and Great Firewall gives a unique perspective on the author’s culture, but here it actually hurts them. The MC transmigrated to a world where nothing is different, except that China is as powerful there as the US is in reality. Other than that, there is no difference from the day-to-day that we already live with so the worldbuilding is something the author just skipped. 2/5Overall: I’m dropping this at chapter 90-something because of the tl quality more than anything else. While the cases are indeed interesting, there’s just not enough there to justify straining to read the terrible translation.
for the sake of my sanity, tell me , is xylon ever going to love his harem(more persistently Eva ) .if not tell me now , because i just don't want to be tormented forever ...
MC's life is too miserable ........................................................................................................................
The MC's name is McGee.
This novel has been able to keep my boredom away quite well and seems to be well received by others as well, yet still doesn't get picked for some reason. Let's just keep voting so that they have less of a reason to kick this one out of the voting pool and are forced to make sure this one is translated well. Idk what grudge they have against the author, but it isn't going to stop me from reading this novel.
The plot is great MC got reincarnated where his father loved him and got married to a nice girl but feels sad for the girl for her family sold her for 100 gold teals. MC loves the girl very much he shows that I spite of being a crippled he shower the loves she need as the wife of a man. The girl Zhang Xiu he saved he should first cured of the demand cultivation and the face since she deserved it. He should helped her in getting revenge and make her his second wife as he deserved of the person she is.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The novel's too slow-paced, the world-building is too messy, and the is non-existent. Not to mention, the first 20 chaps are all just filler. Lastly, the author seems to enjoy abusing the mc a little too much.
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