why is he racist I was just reading out of boredom then he just becomes racist I don't understand why out of nowhere either the person who wrote this racist or some sort of translation error or it could be the wherever this person is is racist but I don't know.
Don't know why there is few reviews here but this story is actually pretty good the character design 4 but Im pretty sure he will improve more the the World background is 5 the story development is also 5 so this story in my opinion is a solid gold...
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My 1st review got deleted anyways I decided to write another one. 1st of all the author is really racist. I admit there are other stories in which authors occasionally put down people of other countries, but this one novel you can not just ignore it as the author is super racist.Every other chapter it's a new country and its people, and the author like dehumanizing these foreign people. Like their lives are worthless, they are all scumbags because he (MC) saw handful of them doing criminal activity.If you are a reader who are from the following countries Myanmar, Vietnam, Japan, Somalia or if you are Muslim. Then I suggest skipping this story.
Its about a guy who found a magical disc of some sort that contains a memory of a cultivator. He's a Healer so you know what he got from that disc right? And this novel contains "Dumb
Favorite book I want morePlease write a second book I want to see what happens next!Everyone should read Feti
Flash is supposed to be the fastest man alive. are you perhaps not alive(kidding) author??? When is ch8 ?
If the author LordFlash sees this like my previous review I have to say there are only 2 novels that have ever and still continue to satisfy my fantasies like this novel, for me personally this is truly a hidden gem and the story could literally go on forever I’d like there to be millions of chapters with Patricks capabilities the novel could indeed go on forever, if the author could perhaps give me a way to message him I could continue to flatter and discuss your work in this novel, I will even download discord if that’s what’s needed to communicate with you author
Okay so I binged this a few nights ago. And let me tell you as a Indian guy who likes cricket and imagines himself in the place of the greats.... bro you wrote a novel about the day dream every indian cricket loving guy has... Seriously!I love your story. And I am really happy for you and your job opportunity in germany. But I really wished there were more updates or longer chapters. After reading 66 chaps it has left me wanting more. Anyways thanks for writing for us. And hopefully you will continue the story. I really want to see your version of the 2007 world cup (50 overs) where we washed out in the group stage and this lead to the 3 greats -Ganguly, Dravid and Tendulkar - taking a back stage and letting a very young and inexperienced team take a crack at the 1st t20 world cup. Like I get goose bumps even thinking about it. To be frank, I don't want us to win the 2007 WC (50 OVERS) just like in cannon. One way that may happen is if vipin is dropped for that series as well. Then when Dhoni is given autonomy is gets into the t20 team. I am getting goosebums just thinking about the iconic matches in that world cup. Especially the ones against Pak and England. Will Vipin and Yuvi do back to back 6x6! (He Shivers Imagining It!)Anyways thx for writing.
This novel is one of the best VRMMORPG novels out there and one of my favourites.The main character Yuan is dense and pure because of his condition and minimum interaction with society. But I guess thats reasonable over an edgy and cringe MC. But Character Development is quite slow compared to the story's overall pacing and I hope it develops.Characters are well designed for each situation and helps keep the story going at a decent flow. (with the occasional face slapping ofc XD)The Background of both the game and real world is well designed, but infomation on the Nine Heavens isn't fully revealed even from where Im at (Im at Chapter 444) and I hope it keeps growing without affecting the overall flow of the story. The Writing is very good with little to no grammatical and spelling errors helping with the consistent immersion. But during some instances the scenery was briefly described which didn't help me fully picture the place in which the situation was going on.The novel is very awesome overall and I would recommend anyone interested in reading Eastern Fantasyor Video Games to give this a try!I would also like to give respect to the author for writing such a novel! Keep up the good work Author!P.S. This is my first ever review if you see any mistakes please point them out and thank you for your time reading up to this point!
I'm so offended please remove the high IQ tag
This book is intriguing. Recommend this