This is a really nice and interesting book. Please keep up the good work. I like how you use your imagination in the making of the book. It makes readers attracted to it. Plus it's funny.
yuri? and possible ntr like ur previous light novel?
The story is quite good. The grammar of course could be better,but still,it's ok. Though,I would have preferred you you used real players, and not made up ones. Overall,it's nice.
Wow This is amazing I I’m so glad that I found i don't understand how this is not popular yet.
What a great story........ ?i really enjoyed reading this....... i love the plot of this book......keep up the good job darkswan?❤ i'm looking forward for more chapters
A great, interesting novel with a unique plot. Though I cannot say I'm not biased, the novel does actually have I do believe that many will find some enjoyment in Aziel's story! It starts a bit far from the past for a 'Modern' world, but it is refreshing at the same time!
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Nice Idea but it looks like or was written by a 13 years old child thats how naive this novel is. I like strong MC but here it is just annoing that you just wish someone comes and destroys them all.All in all Nice Idea but writer sucks bih time
You got to edit the whole book so many mistakes the flow of the story have so many unexplained parts and actions that just pop up its a good novel please fix it
This could be a really good story. I do love the concept, but the execution has not been that great. Granted, I am only about 30+ chapters into the story, but this is enough to give me pause about a number of issues. 1) Next to no character development from anyone. Even the MC at the very beginning didn't really have much emotion one way or the other when finding out he died and has been reborn with a system. 2) The MC is all about getting along with others when it is little girls, but is kill them all when it comes to anybody else. He does not take into consideration his followers feelings at all and just says 'get over it'. His subordinates have major issues with humans as they have killed the families of nearly everyone they know and the MC just does not care. Granted, this could be because he was human originally but it comes across as a little kid sticking his fingers in his ears while screaming, "Lalalalala!!! I can't hear you" so that he does not have to deal with the situation. 3)the MC is a pretty big pervert. While it never explicitly states how old the MC is, I get the impression of someone who is at least late 20s or older. Because he is a tree now, he thinks its perfectly okay to ogle 2 little girls who are bathing in the lake. From the wording of the chapters, I was under the impression of 10-11 year olds who looked like they were 13-14 years old. I might be wrong, but that is how it came across to me. 4)The grammar is not great. I would have to go back and reread certain sections a few times until I could finally piece together the meaning of the sentence. 5) I noticed that the author made it a pay to read starting at chapter 43. I am having issues getting through to chapter 33 without any real story or character development. I refuse to pay to read the rest of this. 6) There is no real guideline on how the MC can actually improve himself. What I mean by this, is that at the end of the very linear growth (at least where I am at), the system says he now needs to evolve. That is all well and good, but a chapter or two later, the MC decides to strengthen his roots and become immune to fire. At what point did the MC have the ability to perform this. It seemed to crop out of nowhere.I think this is all I have for right now. Again, I feel like this could be a really great story concept, but a number of issues need to be addressed.
This is a fairly well written story, except the girl who is probably going to become the female lead is very annoying and it would be better to make her have less interactions with the Mc. Not all stories need romance in them.
Yours Truly Lin Fan IS BACK !!!Mortal down before this GOD!!!This book is created by the same author as The Strongest SystemAnd most importantlyYours Truly IS BACK!!!!