AhmedEmad9773
The novel is very well written, pretty much perfect in my opinion. The plot is flawed though, with several things that just don't make sense.without going into much detail, these flawed plot points are usually underestimations of risk. A character will make a move that is described as full-proof and smart but if you were to look a bit closer, it's simply not.It also suffers from what I'd like to call "OP Character takes risk for no reason" where the mc will take large risks despite not getting much from it.Despite these negatives, the novel is still pretty good. The world is very cool and innovative, the cultivation system is also really cool and the characters are rather fleshed out.Good luck with the rest of the novel :)3.8 Stars
Been ignoring this novel in the past 'cause I taught the story is a generic one. But because of desperation cause I ran out of things to read I finally gave in and tried it.....Didn't know it was this good!!!....definitely recommended to those that haven't read this
Oops I forgot to review one of my top novels after so long! (At chapter 508) ~ ima make it spicy then ~Honestly the MC’s character progression is slow but I appreciate that there is a more realistic resistence to change. You cant expect someone to go from strong family values to ruthless killer at a drop of a hat. He does progress though so chill.He isnt super OP or has any hacks/cheats. He has had a lucky encounter but his grind to the top is not smooth sailing at all. His talented friends keep up with him so there isnt a new group of people every arc... thank God for that because its hard Remembering so many names in novels! Also the depth each side character has is amazing and I ended up torn between main plot and wanting more side stories. Harem? No harem? Not sure yet, the author is tight lipped but there is juicy romance! Romance is a very well written subplot but not a dominate theme (yet). Im still not completly backing any ship yet! I will point out that the authors closure/shut down of one love interest was so well done that even though i hated the character it was worth every word i read. She could make a come back though, who knows how they will progress because these characters arent just a one off appearence. Though IRL history does foreshadow a spicy adulterous return. The unique flavour of this novel is its histories, myths and legends written into the plot. I love exploring Earths rich history through the plot while trying to google the history in the background. The undercurrents of the novel and its mysteries are closely tied with the above and make the novel so much more entertaining. So the world building is off the charts. To summaries, there is a reason why this novel is consistently in the top charts and these rankings are not wrong. PS - if you want a ruthless MC with a tragic backstory without the cringe edgelord vibe check out Blood Elf Monarch. Same brilliant character designs and mysterious plot but opposite vibe from this story. It was my first Avan novel too!
This novel looks awesome!! Please keep going with your work!! It looks interesting and captivating, and It's got a wonderful Mc, not the usual brainwashed idiot.
My best novel
Hey can we get more books like this plz you know with Taya and Judah
Why the hell is this book so underrated? Just finished reading the new update and I like how the author has portrayed Katarina and James' relationship. How he reminded her of her brother. Just moved the book already. Please author update frequently.
Love this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to it. ?writer.
I cried so hard at the end.
Very good read, page turner for sure.
What happen? story ends dangling. any continuation of the story
I liked the story always looked forward to next chapter
