not good english,but i can see you have tried to writing a story,try more hard.i belive you can do better next time.the story need more patients to read.
cool story!
dumb mc ✓ checkannoying mc ✓ checksimp mc ✓ checkmc is just retard doesn't even learn from his past mistakes , calls his system annoying , he has foolish pipe dream of become hero and make world in which every hero is good .drools over every girl .I think author delete bad reviews for maintaining rating. this story is utter garbage, waste of brain cell im sure if u hate dumb mc this story is seriously not for u .
An intriguing blend of magic, mystery and murder set in Victorian England. The protagonist is initially your abandoned talentless orphan, struggling to survive in a world where musicians dominate the magic society. Rapidly caught up in a web of intrigue, he searches for his heritage as Easterner in a world where King Arthur mythos has morphed into madness-stricken royalty, rebellious nobles and hidden powers pulling spuppet trings. The author has cleverly blended the characters of Sherlock Holmes, famous musical composers and shades of Chuthulu into a detective story which is distinctly different from the traditional sword and magic storytelling. Whilst character development is still somewhat a one-dimensional path of orphan to overload with budding romance subplots, it is still worth a read, if only for the novelty of a different genre.
A lot like beginning of the end. Ver good story telling and character development. Good descriptions of the setting. All in all, if you liked beginning of the end, you will like this a lot.?
There are minor grammar mistakes but nothing too bad so far, I enjoy the writing a lot so far and hope I get to see a lot morae in the future
honestly, in my opinion this novel is the best thing I've found on this god forsaken platform and the only thing I dislike about this novel is that I can't read it for free cuz I got no money right now ?
bro just tried to read but pay to read from ch 1 bro na there no way people gonna read it bro and no syponysis bro
A extremely good novel that was abandoned for the Author, what a f shame, the constancy of ppl nowadays is lacking in many ways, yet another for of lacking appears... ? sad.
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Very good start. It is somehow cliche about a mysterious protagonist. The writing quality is pretty good and keep up the suspense. Has some plot holes but overall pretty good. I have high hope to this novel, please don't let become ****...
I haven't read that many chapters yet, but I really enjoy reading system genre stories that take down plot armor. The R-18 took me by surprise haha, but I'm really looking forward to seeing the MC cut down the protagonist!