BlackReaper13
This weeks batch is terrible. Theres so much wrong with this, to the point where I can't be bothered to go out of my way and talk about everything wrong with this. I'm going to keep it brief.-God awful translations. I've read better MTLs.-Soulless nonsense.-Nothing makes sense or is explained.-Bad everything (world building, characters, cheat, writing quality etc, nothing about this was even adequate. it was all below average at best.)TLDR; train wreck not worth reading + a translation somehow inferior to MTLs.
Appears to be another novel where the MC gets everything from a system without putting in any effort. Unless lots of people point out that the plot is amazing later, hard pass.
I honestly stumbled of this story by accident and im pleasantly surprised, the grammar is up and down at times but its very negligible The world building and character development are some of the best ive read in quite awhile will leave you wanting to know what happens next ar every turn.its definitely a must read so take a chance Im genuinely surprised that this isn't rank higher as I've seen some novel who lacked the execution andOriginality be rank higher but to each his own i gues
The first chapter and I am hooked. Are you kidding me? Why is she locking his heart away?! Oh God, the darkness is enticing.I love it. love the pace, love the story, love Dan. I can't wait to see how this will turn out.
it had a great start but it gets worse and worse as I read on, just booooooooooooooooring
Interesting story. Just the fact that he is playing support instead of generic swordsman is a big plus on my side.Unfortunately it is extremely slow paced and combined with the slow update it makes a potentially great novel into something forgettable.By the time i have enough to read again i might have forgot a great deal of it since nothing significant and marking happened yet.
I love this book. Easily one of my favorites on the platform. However, for one reason or another, the author seems to keep disappearing. It's been ages since the book has been updated, and since I'm kinda broke right now and can't buy any coins (much less enough to fully catch up) I'm stuck at a gigantic cliffhanger. Antihero, if you see this, I hope you're alright. If it's something with your health, understandable. If you don't have time to write, that's fine. If you're just not interested in completing the story, I'm cool with that. Just let us know. I want to know how things will end, but I I'll never find that out I'd rather be told than waiting around like an idiot for something that will never come.
This novel is just amazing! I thought it was originally going to be a overlord knockoff but it has surprised me in all the right places.
a good story with an MC who only cares about him and his quest to have eternal life !...............................mmmmmmmm....................................
The best part of this novel is its quick flow.Many readers and reviewers have already commented on the lack of Scientific or even Pseudo-Scientific knowledge displayed by the author.The lack is quite glaring, and difficult to ignore. Exceptional perseverance is needed to gloss over the nonsensical 'Scientific' bits.World building should be viewed with astigmatic lenses. Too much focus would highlight the obvious mismatched and illogical details....So yes! The novel isn't much, but it can be enjoyed by lightly reading without too much emphasis on details. So the quick flow pacing of the plotlines and 'actions' is a major plus for this novel.
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Somehow author wants you to cringe every chapter with how frequent he/she was overly glorifying MC, most of the time MC has kind of almost likeable character, but there a also lots of times when he's just throw logic out of the window and go needlessly nuts just to show how desperate author was to glorify MC, and gosh, it was so bad that MC's friends could not get almost any resources or opportunities without the help of the overly glorified MC. The world view is childish black and white. The cultivation feels lacking in imagination. The story is very repetitive, stretched out and the characters development is so bad that you can just literally skip a few arcs and you will be able to catch up on whats going on easily without missing substantial parts.
