Very good, congratulations, I'm on 7, just one thing I didn't understand, I don't know if it will explain, but if the system had control, why didn't it control Sra Claus when he was talking to Santa Claus?
Love the whole story so please don't drop this. Although i said i will wait patiently for the next update but please don't forget about this story. You left this at a big cliffhanger =(
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It was really good reading a story that actually reminds of your crush suddenly after long period of time even tho there was no such scene as this but this story is creating a really good romantic imagination
It's always great to see more horror stories on Webnovel! These are a bit unusual, in a fresh way. The writing still has some ways to go, but I hope the author continues to improve and share their works!
this is good! giving the zombie vibes in description and is well written just need proofreading for better quality because it will shape the baby into a big one!
Ok so...this story is briliant and i love it, the chapters are a little shorter than most but not that much....i like the characters and the world...i really like the writing style since i'ts easy to read and understand ???????
The way the system works is bery interesting. And the MC isn't a coward wich is always a plus point for me.
I love this story so far hope the author keep it consistent ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
i enjoyed it quite a bit. the plots could be better but I am curious about how hes gonna tide his career in this mind prison/game.
A mafia-themed VR novel? Unique, and unlike anything I've seen before. This story is amazing, the plotline, superb. Stepping into the life of Zen Taro certainly is interesting, although I won't go into any details out of fear of spoiling what is to come, hehe. But, I highly recommend this novel, and you can be d*mn sure whatever Destiny_Aitsuji writes is top notch.