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It's worth reading reading. I hope it gets picked and by the way, does anyone knows the name of the raw of this novel?................................
Hmph, it's not like this book or anything, b-baka! *Autochains into a sick 42-hit combo*The characters are a delight to read and their relationship dynamic is quite frankly, hilarious.10/10 looking forward to more.
interesting story, so far the development of story is good hope the next chap will not drop..keep going
I like the it i can't wait for more please plz...........................................................................................................................
plus points 1 finally no panda instead we have a winter bear(polar bear ice type) second beast is a gold fish with 5-6 horns2 till now no cliche troupe rather totally opposite thing happened in novel while i was sure it would turn into a cliche but to my surprise it didn't 3 no bs op evolution system just a information talent which only shows race, current lvl ,max level possible,skills and their degree of mastry no which evolution material would evolve the beast etc very good thing the world is still in the starting of regaining and similar to the late mid stage shelters/cities in many zombie apocalypse series or games all in all
A nonsense ranking system. A B-Rank skill that was immune to curses etc.. Etc... My brain can't comprehend this ranking nonsense.
This is definitely an unusual story, but it does have a pretty amusing start. Honestly, it's easy to have a lot of fun starting this novel and going along for the ride until about 1/4th of the way into the story. Silly as it is, you can see a lot of effort was put into the "System" and it can be fun to watch his growth at the start.
There are a lot of 4th wall breaks, but this is really only at the beginning and this (mostly) stops after the 5th chapter or so. The story starts off pretty good but slowly gets worse as time goes on. As the title might imply, the MC is reincarnated as a stick. Which is funny at first, but stops being funny later and the story honestly doesn't have a lot to fall back on.
The MC himself is kinda bland a lot of the time, and the other characters he interacts with are usually just as bad. The first recurring character he meets is introduced in a somewhat forced way and just decides to tag along with him regardless of how he feels. Aside from her initial meeting, she's not THAT bad, but isn't anything special personality-wise. The other characters he meets, end up disappearing and taking a backseat 80% of the time. When they do appear, they're pretty forgettable.
Speaking of forgetting, the MC does this...a LOT. He ends up forgetting many things and sometimes making the most ridiculous errors anyone with common sense would notice. It's implied the villain is behind this, but it's hard to tell where the villain's manipulation starts and his own ignorance begins. If it is the villain's doing it is somewhat poorly explained and repeated way too often.
While we're on the topic of antagonists, this story handles them even worse than their MC. The wizard wants to capture him and use him to make a weapon! ...Until he doesn't. Yeah, he ends up never meeting the MC, using something else, and it works out fine. All that buildup and background went nowhere. Until a wolf notices the MC and wants to use him to make himself stronger! ...Until he doesn't. Yep, antagonist ends up never meeting the MC when looking for him, uses something else, and it works out fine. But we can't forget the main villain who wants to turn the MC into a weapon... Wow, what exciting and compelling antagonists with such DIFFERING goals.
Tldr: You might enjoy this story if it's not too silly for you. Read it about 1/4th of the way, then drop it while you still have any good memories of it.
As the first real reader review i shall tell you the person who is reading this because you want to know about the book to read the book because, it is a good story, so stop reading this and read the book.
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This is a very creative and funny web novel. The author also included art of the characters involved so as to help the readers better visualise and imagine. Good book
A good and progressive beginning, development of character is moving at a good pace, the switching of tenses here and there is a small flaw, otherwise storyline is good.
