I had already read the first story and decided to give this re-release a chance. After reading 168 chapters, I noticed that this story had quite a lot of changes. 1- It doesn't make sense for a human who died and was in a sort of "limbo" as a soul to be able to use abilities and deceive Death itself.2- For someone who has an entire lifetime of experience and has just reincarnated, it doesn't make sense for his first decision to be seeking revenge because the previous owner of the body joined a tournament and died.3- How does he manage to use his martial arts skills in a body with no experience, muscle memory, or preparation? At this moment, he has the experience, memories, and theoretical knowledge from his previous life... It doesn't make sense for him to fight and defeat people more powerful than him currently.4- Why does someone with a lifetime of experience, knowledge, techniques, and life lessons get so drastically influenced by the current body even after so many chapters?!5- Again, how can someone with so much life experience attempt revenge/murder so poorly prepared and impulsive, to the point of not even worrying about properly planning for possible complications?6- After the national tournament ends, he suddenly decides to travel in search of his supposed mother, whom he neither knows nor has solid information about. Arriving at the city where he will board the boat/ship, he suddenly becomes a companion/adventure buddy with someone he just met and accepts any decision from this person, even knowing what happened with his father. Because of this, they are captured and sold as slaves. Again, how can someone with so much life experience be so dumb?!I'll stop here because there are too many things that don't make sense and are just thrown in our faces without any or almost any coherent explanation from the author. I would prefer the plot/story of the original book. [ Google Translator ]
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Wow!! What a fantastic and demure book.I recommend this to everyone..And also if any suggestions for the book do mention it as a reply
Please read it and add it to your library
There are lots of mistakes with grammar, like it is a translation but not translated well. It might be a good story if the translation was better but I only got through one chapter. Hard to follow and doesn't flow well with grammar problems.
After reading all these chapters all I can say is that the author is new if he tackles it well then it could turn out to be an interesting story.
finally a new natural disaster novel I am waiting for I hope or author will update frequently this time good luck author
It's absolutely peak, trust. Read it. .
Neeed lots mooooooore please please please. Thank you :)
the writing is so good i almost though the author actually expierenced this!good read unique perspectives magic,fantasy ect pretty good all and all
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
my Father yelled like a rock singer from inside the house.