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Wow amazing, finally Samantha is convinced to go with Aaron.
I am loving, I wish Damon would be fine
The synopsis of the book is intriguing. The FL and ML characters are lovable. I'm thankful the author didn't drag out story lines to prolong finishing the book. It's so good I completed reading book it in two days. The 4.5 star rating is because the book needs a little editing. Well done author.
I love the entirety of this book's plot...the status difference between the Alpha and Yael. I'm so down for how it goes with them....good job author
A very good book, hope to read more and knows what happen next. wish Angelina and the baby pull through their hardships
Awesome story
I feel bad towards Ashton and Rick. Wish they would have a sequel
Another great book by the author! I am in love with this series!
Just haven’t been able to read the last few chapters… Is anyone else having an issue loading the last 4 chapters? It just keeps saying “failed”
Loved all 3 trinity books. Will there be any more books in this series?
oh my God. will Elena marry him????
Great Story! Keep Going!
beautiful! just beautiful
It's fascinating how the characters feel well-developed and the plot keeps me hooked. The main character actually faces challenges, and there's no sudden 'idiot syndrome.' I would recommend it for enjoyable reading.
However, I have a small gripe that's been bothering me. The author lacks understanding of the manga production process, despite writing about a manga setting. Although it's not a major issue since it's a novel, for someone with some artistic background, there are many details in the story that seem out of place. The author claims that the manga updates occur weekly, but in the first chapter, the protagonist muses that the update might only happen after solving a murder mystery – a task that typically takes multiple chapters to resolve, even in popular series like Kindaichi or Detective Conan. It's especially baffling since the manga is just starting its second season and introducing new characters, including two joining the main group.
The author tries to cram all this action into a single chapter: character introductions, getting involved in the murder mystery, investigation, and capturing the culprit. How on earth does that fit within a weekly update format? The pacing feels rushed, considering the length of the story and the promised frequency of updates. If I were the artist, I'd question my decision to work on such a project.
I admit it might seem like a trivial complaint, but for someone writing about manga characters, the author seems unaware of the constraints and expectations of the medium. In the next chapter, it turns out there was a special 'event' for the manga creator, which wasn't previously disclosed. While it's understandable that the author might need an explanation, it's surprising that readers didn't notice the extensive effort required for such a lengthy narrative. I guess one reader pointed out the issue, leading to the clarification.
