Es muy bueno la Historia, sin duda el MC se mantiene fiel a su Rol de Villano de segunda y su personalidad se mantiene en su mente bien centrado y no pensar con la cabeza de abajo o el estúpido del corazón y sus emociones y sentimientos sobre el mundo donde habita se manteniendo fiel y al parecer no se podra cambiar(lo cual es bueno...despues de todo lo que le hicieron)(Muchos autores que hacen este tipo de historias deberian aprender de esta trama siendo sincero xd) y el desarrollo de MC es muy bien desarrollado, pueden verlo como el clasico ingenuo a mitad de la historia, pero todo gira a 180 grados a medida que avanza la historia de cuan cruel, frio y indiferente en realidad lo convirtió el mundo novedoso, La Heroines al menos tienen vergüenza de sus actos lo cual es muy bueno para su desarrollo, Solo faltaria escenas del Delicioso y sin duda seria 10/10
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Pretty decent story, but the translation errors and various issues spoil it so hard. Also, only 20 free chapters, for something this poorly translated hurts.
Love how the story is progressing so far
unfortunately a very generic stereotypical story if you can even call it that because it is painfully slow with a lot of unnecessary repetitive dialogue and a lot of filler chapters: multiple chapters with just 'good morning' and descriptions of eatingEvery single conflict basically reads "How dare you do that to my young master" "dont you know who i am?" gets slapped, humiliated, comes back and rinse repeat... the characters have zero personality growth and the MC is painfully stupid forgetting constantly about the things he has aquired (MC gains an invaluable item to awaken a bloodline and simply does not use it at all), at times even his own system.There are so many inconsistencies in the story among which one of my favorites is that his sister gets a 1 week leave from the academy but the journey from her academy to her hometown takes more than 2months already with countless perils along the way to which she would have died multiple times over... another one being the MC staying at the exact same cultivation (peak spirit master) for 2 entire months while reaching there only took what? 2 weeks?futhermore the MC complains on a regular basis about the arrogance of nobles yet every chance he gets he regards everyone as lowly mortals - quite ironic.The only character i genuinely feel stands out is Xi Meili and author does her dirty by making her a walking garbage disposal unit.I saw a lot of potential in the novel when i started reading despite the overly pompous way the characters talk but due to the before mentioned points said potential was in my opinion sadly lost.
Overall I’d say pretty good, one thing I appreciate is that the writing and grammar is readable without egregious mistakes. World setting and character design is fairly in depth and thorough although sometimes I find myself lost in terms of the different powers of stuff. Sure the author has clearly laid out the power structure but it’s easy to forget when switching between colors and tiers and the “well this person has a tier 3 core but their attacks are tier 4” idk maybe it’s just me but I find it confusing.A word of caution, this book is nauseatingly cliche, I won’t take away stars for it because it was warned at the beginning but sometimes I find myself just wanting to skip the long sections of cliche wholesomeness. Personally I’d like to see a bit darker of a setting with more conflict.
The translation quality is garbage all the names of the knights titles are translated wrong the grammar is horrible the wording and the editing is also bad I'm dropping this novel because of the poor translation.it's a shame since the novel is pretty decent otherwise
I like your story it's very interesting story
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hello author can you explain rewrite pace, are you going to rewrite the whole thing or locked chapter, and why are you rewriting, I am quite curious plus when do I read this book and thx if you read this.
i swear this novel is so good and funny af ?❤️
I personally love the the characters they are well fleshed out and we'll thought. While the world building is pretty amazing the author gives us just enough information to be interested but not enough to answer all mysteries. So I highly recommend giving this underrated story a try