true it was a good story of its own when there was monthly release of chapters I excitedly binge read it. but when the creator has stopped developing one of his best novels I became disappointed, sadly you can still read it but lower your expectations and treat it as passing time.
True.
Oh.
"the wood rises for all sizes"
more chapters pleaseeeeee
This novel needs some serious cleanup and fixing. Almost all introductions to new items/spells or anything with a unique title is missing in the text. Like literally missing! See an example in chapter 187:
"Right at that moment, he opened a piece of paper on the table and started drawing Xu Que smoking his cigarette. When he was done, he titled it - !"
Yes, the sentence ends after the dash and the exclamation mark! This is still an unimportant thing but in the beginning almost all such titles are simply not there, the first time they are introduced. Later it starts becoming better but nonetheless many are still not there.
Chapter - 1853(dropped at)
Timestamp - 29-O4-2024
Review:-
It was a beautiful journey, there were many beautiful memories, there was a sense of thrill and mysteriousness at the beginning.
But God lord everything is so repetitive ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ, after one point of the story it just felt like this novel was trying to eat away at my soul.
If you are expecting a exciting plot, something that will make your blood pump with adrenaline then you are at the wrong place( such a wrong place), the author is just crunching numbers here billion, trillion, quintillion, quattuordecillions, duovigintillions, tresvigintillions +++,
It was good at the beginning (only at the beginning, the above first paragraph is for this beginning) but after the MC leaves his world the story starts to take dive
C25 such incompetence! he shouldn't have tried this dungeon if he had no knowledge of it. he even dragged his friends along...
Why ending like this?? I dont want..
It’s not the Best, not the worst it’s a Good Short Novel :) It’s solid for me.
HahHa so funny
In one word thrilling... i love the story pace and outline. it makes me want to read more and more. the detailed explanation, nice hook. hoping for a more stable update.
Good job author!