James5460
Hey people...
This is my first attempt at trying to harness the gift of the pen, so I plead with you all to forgive all detected errors and short-comings, as the mistakes of a imperfect author.
You all are free to criticize and ask radical questions ..I will surely reply them in the comments.
Once more forgive me and prepare to suffer the danger of been addicted.
Lena... She knows how to make a book that truly exceeds expectations. Although I am only a few chapters in, I can already tell that this book is going to be gold, and I am not saying this because she's a friend. I genuinely believe this book has something weaved within its pages that could change the FL industry into something more than just a sm*t or romance book. All I'm saying is that you should give it a try; be prepared to be quickly amazed, though, because I was. Good job, Lena, and I do mean that. 11/10 so far. Might be the first Webnovel I actually read for real on this app.
Hello Reader here the story is good but it feels slow
How this novel is connected to Stop, Friendly Fire! and what was earlier?
An old man not "reincarnated and become young again" but straight up old man in an academy story? Is he a teacher there? Or those 30 year old secret agents going to school to complete their undercover kinda type of guy? Nvm, he might actually be reincarnate as a young lad again which will disapprove what I just thought from reading the name. Pretty interesting misunderstanding tho.
Is there going to be a sequel? Would like to see what happens after otherwise it'd be a bummer
This story was amazing. It actually has a lot of love in it. Even confused interactions that confounded me for the character. Made me want to shake them sometimes. I very much so enjoyed the book.
great book, great storyline that was unique!
Cannot wait to read about them finally being together and starting their lives together.
It’s a decent story but needs a good English editor to make reading less frustrating. I think I will scream if I read: “nevertheless” or “needles to say” one more time. They are excessively overused and not always used correctly.
okay so the ending to 1st book is awful and unfinished with the triplets she has ziah chat on Vespa in the second book. which ticked me off. the triplets and Vespa are more side characters in the 2nd book as well. don't know where she is going with this... cont in another comment.
absolutely amazing, just like the other novels by this author
I can't wait for the next update ...️
