My writing wasn't good enough. So, gave up. (Will come back if ever got the motivation again.)
Very good story, i was impressed with the likeable and intelligent MC and the girls too....................................................
This might seem a little early for a proper review, but let me just say this.The writing quality is not good, there’s a bunch of mistakes, and some things seems random.And I recommend you let AI check the spelling, and if you’re serious about everything I would rewrite the chapters (I learned that the hard way)Either way, I hope you publish more often so you can improve yourself.
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Will you ever come back to this novel to finish it ?
I liked the comedy, are you right? ♥♥continued
"Then, Mat, what the smart human will do?" asked Kenji.
"Oh ok, and then i have to create the hero right?"
"Dahyun ranked 1!" Hanbin yelled to me.
My world's on fire, how about yours?
Balak niyang sakyan ang kabaliwan ng kambal para patunayan na wala itong katotohanan at magising na si Ark sa mga delusion niya.
"Do you have a sewing machine and some unused cloth or silk?" she ask elder Trina with excitement