Jenna... No, Megie.
I'm going to reread the story first though
The story itself is extremely interesting, while the writing quality is at a perfect level for such a novel. The plot is enjoyable, and the characters' emotions are drawn out well. It's really a great novel! Keep up the good work, author!
Abrupt to the point of parody. Seems pretty typical.
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I'm just here to review to claim fp on event
Overall a good novel. As the author promises it avoids most of the cliches/pitfalls of other webnovels. The plot, execution etc are very good.But OMG how verbose it is. Every chapter filled with descriptions after descriptions of the smallest things. The most annoying thing is that they start anywhere, middle of dialogue, scene description, etc so by the time the long meandering descriptions of somethings have ended (which towards the end may not even have any relation with the original context) you would lose track of the original context itself. If author can improve on this aspect and generally the writing quality, then this can be a great book.
With much enthusiasm and avidity, the author presents us with an engaging story. The storyline, as well as the presentation and design of the characters throughout the story, continue to be appealing and winsome. Sadly, I do have to add that there are a lot of mistakes concerning grammar and vocabulary - and that’s alright, everyone makes them - yet I believe it would be a pity since this work has some potential. It simply needs to be polished into the gem it might be. I truly believe that this work could profit from an experienced and/or skilled editor so that it might develop into more.Overall, I find it to be a relaxing and engaging read, very suited for this platform. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
Really enjoy the story and the character progression. I think you are Doing a great job even if it is just a test and you should keep it up. Good luck and hope you enjoy it because others seem to enjoy reading it. :)
Awesome Story! .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Это прекрасно. Все начиная от строения мира и заканчивая характером гг действительно заслуживает одобрения. От книги не возможно оторваться. Жду продолжения автор!!!!?