Yajin3004
this novel is great. I have fallen in love with the story and the characters. the plot is unique and we'll thought of. the author did a great job in executing this.
I will not support nationalistic authors. No wait, this guy is not even an author. He is just a copy paster, who has taken a template and changed the main character's name. He doesn't deserve the title of Author. Webnovel, you should have learned this by now.
yo this is amazing. i usually ate chinese novels because of all the cliches and propaganda. but this is really good, funny and very heart warming. he doesnt get any of the girls randomly but its a slow satsifying proccess. keep it up
good
Story plot is good Not rush Op mc With its struggles Good suddle comedy ? ????????????????????????????????
This was my first dip into writing a full-length story connected by multiple parts, if you like where this one going look forward to sequels from multiple character perspectives.
HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THIS PEAK I DONT UNDERSTAND HOW YOU DO IT...........................................................................
Why do people seem to like this? I can't find anything interesting or special about this novel.Avarage writing, avarage World building. You can see the story development from miles away and the MC is a total idiot.Non of this makes sense.The MC Master is one of the worst offenders, she is literally the most useless thing in this novel.The Demon sect is petty thieves sect with strict morals.The Cultivation systems are stupidly complicated and serve no purpose. An immortal is literally weaker than a mortal in mind and fortitude.Even the most sheltered snail can gain a little wisdom after living for 30 years, the cultivators in this novel can not.This novel is meant to be funny, it isn't.It is meant to be exciting, it isn't.It is meant to be surprising full of plot twists, IT IS NOT.The MC is an hypocrite, dumb as a door and a waste of space and opportunity.
Story has a great start but from academy ark it became really boring, mc just a side character, he has less screen time from either one of his friends and enemies, i'm currently at chapter 206 and i can't read it further.
From what i see he would be a side character, or one of many mc in his own slice of life story. Why i think so? because he wants to travel with his friends in the future.
So if you like story with several mc's, you would like this story, if not it would be boring and a waste of time.
It has a great start though, i really liked it.
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more chapters pls my only complaint would rlly be that there arent a lot of chapters right now, but it does look like author is releasing more everyday
I'm actually being generous, this novel is like it was written by a 10 year old. You can barely read it and it's like a copy of all the novel's of the same type. but worse, the author needs an editor so that this novel can be slightly readable.
