The basic idea is a lot of fun. Still, there is way too much wish fulfillment going on here. The main character is overpowered from the start, yet it is mostly based on a ring that can be stolen by anyone.In addition, the main character starts out with a broken back and has just woken up from a coma. Yet, when she appears later to talk to her dad in his office, he just is happy to see her and agrees to let her fight his bodyguards.Between the character being too overpowered and the rest of the world being in a mental la-la land, I just can't get into this story.
I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.Moving on to technical issues, I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?All the best!
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I really tried to give this series a chance, but it is just too painful to read. As soon as the MC gains the system, he pays for it with all his IQ and humility. From that chapter on, all we get is an arrogant POS dumber than a goldfish. Translation is OK, but this novel isn't even worthy of MTL.
would be a lot better if it didn't just repeat the same obvious information over and over again, these first forty chapters could have been 20
From what I can tell, it is a novel where the MC finds himself in very cliché moments; however the MCs mindset towards said cliche moments is in the mindset of an antagonist, yet he finds himself not being able to be the antagonist in these situations.
Recently I've been suffering from some terrible insomnia and I sometimes take hours to fall asleep. This novel through some unholy means put me to sleep in a mere 3 chapters. 0/5
This novel starts very well. The plot is interesting and the MC is sa real robber. But after the novel begin to be like... big ****.... *sigh* this numbers are just... too much... I know that they can live a long time and get a lot of time to copulate... But please respect urself and the others... I hope Wu Qi will not fall in this kind of depravaty.... I'm quite sad because I really love this story. The beginning was really good and now the story still lacking a bit. Don't forget the MC is a thief, but he didn't enjoy the troubled times of the war to steal something? Even if he is a commander... The only things he gets it's fish-scales and he even didn't rob them... Irecommend this novel only for the beginning I'm hoping that this novel will gets good change by the time...
An interesting read indeed albeit very few grammatical errors here and there, the story and plot makes up for it.As the story begins you get and idea of the world and the background, especially with the tower at the center.I also love the personalities of the characters as they feel genuine the more you read their interactions. Good writing good plot, excellent story.
I read the novel after watching 2gether for like 5th time. I watched 2gether series few years ago. I watched it again few days ago. I never thought of reading the novel. but I'm glad I did. I love the novel. I think I like novel more. ❤️
Raw title: 我真不想躺赢啊Status: 1177 Chapters (Ongoing).................................................................................................