Well if you already read Warlocks of the magus world don't read this. Disappointing MC, don't knoe how to choose spells and his intelligence well he doesn't have any so. This novel came first i know but WMW improved everything and made a badass protagonist so don't lose your time with this and read WMW.
The writing us phenomenal but still need work on grammar and punctuation. Overall, the plot is well written and guides the readers to its intended outcome. I've read some novels with the similar premise, but they were poorly written.How do you feel writing a story that captivates my eye?
Thanks for really making something slow paced but also interesting in lookism. I really really loved it. The way it has been started and the way it is continuously updated.... Its amazing
Nice book wasn’t expecting it to be this catchy ( C be movinn)
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Is a really good story keep up the good work
this is a great novel and i found it very interesting.it is a must read from my side.
I like this novel cuz of this OP mc that have a godly powers that it bored him to death but i hope that Author will never abandon this treasure ever again...
I haven't actually read this fanfiction I'm just reviewing since it doesn't appear normally for me
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I just really don't find this story to be gripping in any way and it feels too shallow and like story that has already been told thousands of times. I don't know why I keep getting this recommended to me, but I'm really not personally interested in it.
I really love this story, i ve read all the available chapters ( free ones), it made me cry it made me laugh, honestly it is really good, only the first few chapters till the story really starts are, well they re good, just not as good as the later chaptersAlright so to the reviewWriting qualityNow, i really love how author wrote his story, a few grammar mistakes here and there (between he and she) but you can understand nonethless if you pay attention, but still 5 stars for the way he wrote itStory developmentNow in the first chapters till the story starts up, it s well, quite average, but after that i had no words, like i know i sound biased but this is my honest opinion, for the 73 chapters that i read at the end i had no words, it s so good, well beside in the middle of the "earth" part, that was a bit boring to me, but still 5 stars as i loved itCharacter designNow, i love the main character, the character development of him is done so so good that u don t realise till u read chapter 73,or maybe u do but you don t pay attention, just when u read chapter 73 and be like wow wtf, like srslyI also like his big sister and friends, although not much character development over there, maybe his big sis, but it cannot compare to the main character, at all, at least my opinion, but i didn t read a story that made me like it so much so imma still give it 5 starsUpdate stabilityI can t comment on this, because i didn t finish the story as i read only the free chapters, but like, this is a biased vote here, but u can just ignore as it can be as wrong as it can be right, so 5 stars, only because i really love the story overall,World backgroundNow i was really immersed in the story that i didn t really pay that much attention to actually write a review about it like, i know where the story happens, where they are everytime, but i can t write a detail review about it, but yeah as above, i still give 5 stars, honestly the background was enough for me, i understood everything that was going on. I know the review is quite biased as i really loved it, but i know now that not everyone will that s for certain, so if someone reads my review, take that in mind too, always don t have high expectations as u would really enjoy it more, i mean i avoided this novel when i first saw it just because i thought it s some normal cultivation cliche and look at me now