at first I was sure that this would be very interesting, but it's a shame that mc beta and being too honest about the system makes me feel that there is no interesting side of mc like its special system, mysteriousness because of the previous background then there is a dark tag, it feels very flat like this
I remember reading the same book a couple of weeks ago. The plot and setting exactly the same but different names. ❓
I absolutely love this so far it seems like a mix of all my favorite styles of novels and it is mixed so well! system, getting property from the system, harem, and weak to strong it seems like! I’m very excited to see where this goes! And keep up the great work author!
Don't walk away from this one....RUN! The summary forgot to mention he is in a modern world and likes to stream his deductions... A large chunk of the chapters is the viewer comments. So many of this kind on trial...not one selected as far as I can remember.
The novel is based on villain, so expect some evil tendencies in his character. He has got a good head in his shoulder and is able to think calmly in situations. So go ahead and read it.And thank you Translator sama ~ for translating this, I just want you to know your work is being appreciated, atleast by me.I hope you can continue translating more, pretty please ?
Lumayan juga cerita nya, ada yg tau tempat baca MTL nya, saya cukup penasaran kelanjutan cerita, Untuk cerita nya sendiri cukup mebuat penasaran, terlepas dari salah paham MC, ya banya pertanyaan kenapa Mc di buat padat dan terjadi nya kesalahpahaman, pada pengarap dunia dia Renkanasi, jadi bikin penasaran,
This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 11.I usually don't dabble in fan-fic, and for that reason what I feel might be non-standard could be perfectly normal in this specific setting. Bear that in mind whenever you read something negative I have to say.The little there is of the story reads like some 1950 style of private eye film noir, complete with voice over and everything. The setting, however, is very much today -- today in a world with demons roaming the world as cannon fodder.At chapter eleven there's already a hefty body count, but nothing much has happened. We're following a male lead who kills demons and a female one who feels bad.The writing style follows one of the worst cases of non-standard information lay-out I have ever seen, but the author is explicitly clear that this is deliberate already in the synopsis. As a reader you simply don't have the right to be negatively surprised, but you can, as I did, note that it just doesn't work for you.Dialogue reads like a script, but the feeling of talking heads remain nonetheless. There are also a few occurences where exposition and reflections get mixed up, but overall the author is very disciplined when it comes to following the created rules for information delivery.Run on sentences detract from the reading experience even if you buy into the layout of the story.So for the stars.Writing: Four stars. This is an aggregate of a five star English used and a three star visual narrative. If you accept the way the story is delivered then this is a rock solid five stars.Updates: Five stars. No discussion.Story: Five stars. I personally would prefer to give it three, but I'm simply not familiar with the story/game that this work is a derivate of. Maybe it's supposed to be like this. For that reason I choose not to bash the narrative and give it the full five stars.Character: Four stars. There's a torrent of dialogue, and there are archetypes aplenty. There is, however, very little insight into the characters. I could have shaken my head and given it five stars anyway, but I want to understand my characters. Observe that the understanding might be implicit, given that this is a fan-fic after all, but I still want to feel the characters even if I'm supposed to be familiar with them from the original works.World. Four stars. I'm applying the exact same reasoning as for character above. There is world, but not enough. I'm aware it might be an implicit understanding, even an unwritten contract between writer and reader, that I'm supposed to be familiar with it. For me that's not a good enough excuse to skimp on it.Lastly I want to remind you I'm reviewing a style of story I'm entirely unfamiliar with. My words here reflect the experience I carry with me from reading other stories.
From the 39 chapter's currently released I highly recommend this book it has such good world development and i can relate with the character so much, because he starts out average and a few lazy tendency that stick with him for a little but it makes him seem way more down to earth and like it could be a real person which some books don't put any effort in doing which i find amazing
Nice, Storyline I like it, thank you author ?
After reading up to chapter 220, I can say that this story is the uncrowned number one novel on this website. The writing is very well done with a very satisfying flow and pace. There are no fillers and no repetition. Each chapter is a delight to read and the source of incrutiating pain (because we have to wait for the next chapter).The world building unravels as the story progresses and it makes sense. There is some plot armor but it is very light armor as it is justified by the previous knowledge of MC.The enemies don't talk for the sake of talking and there is no stupid evil person offending the MC with no concrete benefit unlike many other stories.The translation quality is top notch and is stable. We wish there would be one or two more chapters per week but hey, we can't have everything we want in life I guess.Overall, I can't wait to read more and wish to thank everyone involved in bringing this magnificent story to all of us. Much love from Algeria!
Going into this novel sadly my initial expectations were low due to not being a fan of 'slice of life' novels. However that all quickly changed. I can tell the author puts a lot of time into their writing or he/she may have one of those very creative minds. I believe some people who begin reading might be turned off by the info dump. However if you can get over that hurdle you will see how the author goes into great depth with the characters, the world background, and much more making it quite an intriguing read.The last thing worth mentioning is grammar of the novel. If I had go make a ranking criteria of all the novels I have read based on grammar then this novel would be placed within my top 5.I normally don't do reviews because I am terrible at them but this is a great novel and I hope to see it get more credit so that author might pump out more chaps ?.
I’ve enjoyed my time spent reading this, I came upon it randomly and once I started reading I got hooked. Even though there was a time where we weren’t getting as many chapters I still couldn’t wait for more, thank you for the experience.