Man my favourite novel Fan-fic so 5 starts. I still hasn't start reading it. It was just found this In new release ranking.......................................................
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I absolutely love it!! Perfect!! Keep up the good work....... I can't wait to read more chapters..... So creative and fantastic!! I hope Moulin eventually show his ability in front of everyone, and I'm so excited to know their shocks and reactions ?????????????
Author supporting his own work. This is a story that will be updated daily with chapters.An action Weak to strong story as the character Evolves completing tasks that only chen rui and otaku would do.
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Its a great story so far, great job! I’M a fan of dirty, gory details so I’m definitly intrigued. Its not my type genre, but I enjoy a good plot and this book has it.
I found it impossible to suspend my disbelief.Nowhere near enough info about how dungeons work, how people enter them, who's monitoring them, required permissions etc.Character development and motivations are also lackluster. So you have an MC who is tired of hunting in the dungeons, and what does he do after retirement? You guessed it, hunting in the dungeons. Except now he's supposed to be carrying stuff around, yet he keeps getting involved in fighting anyway.All but one of the hunters die in the dungeon, yet all of the carriers survived? Nah, nothing suspicious, nobody investigates stuff, business as usual.MC wanted to spend more time with his kid, but he keeps dungeon hunting at every opportunity, even if it means leaving his son with his recruiter whom he barely knows. Who accepts it without complaint for some bizzare reason.