A straightforward litRPG, but with its own mysteries and twists to keep it fresh. The story opens in medua res - the protagonist has died and already had his meeting in the after life, and we are left only guessing what happened and why.
As stands, the 'curse' could be more substantial, but -10% HP may end up playing out as more annoying for the MC than one may initially expect. There are many questions: what kind of person was the MC? Why does he make some morally questionable choices so easily? Do others in this world have curses or even blessings?
There is much to answer, explore, and build with this story. If you're interested in a story that starts similarly to many litRPGs but carries with it the promise of intrigue and twists, including that of the protagonist themselves, this is worth checking out.
I don’t have much to say at the moment. Will be updating this at chapter 50. It is quite a nice novel this far. It could use someone peer reading and helping fix minor mistakes, but otherwise its got potential.
A major recommendation is to put a ranking system. Though this might not work depending on how the systems align across planets. If you do put recommend a spoiler at the top of said info page.
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worth to read.have fun & enjoy reading
Great Book i normally never finish a book as it doesn't keep me interested long enough to wanna keep me reading, but this book did!! i love it thank you very well written
This was a great book. There were no boring parts. it was great, and the steamy parts too. I give it the highest stars. waiting for more
Another wonderful book. I read both books within a few days and loved them.
Beautiful story. My only issues, although this has nothing to do with the writing but the characters themselves, is how they are both too stubborn to just be honest with their feelings. Also, idk what’s the connection to FOX. It seemed interesting but it got forgetten. Why get the journal?
5 stars ...
Very interesting story. I totally loved the strong female mafia and how lovable is Alessandro,the most intriguing De Niro brother. I can't wait for Vincent's story.
lovely one
137 chapters 9/6/23
honestly, this is the first ever book I read with little to no heavy complications and i just love it! worth the time and coins! ?