If this is anything like the author's previous work "The First Order" it has a lot of potential. I personally loved that book but it remains to be seen if this novel can live up to the hype. Regardless, I'm giving it five stars in the hope it gets selected and does indeed live up to the hype.
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
What I like about :Starting was pretty good. 1 : I also like how he used zerg tech to merge time alien and many thing he achieved using tech from different world. 2 : Mixing of different worlds tech , techniques , magic to achieve new. What I don't like about :1 : mc is a idiot. He acts like he is smart (sometime he actually come up with good things )but some time acts dumb waste his skills don't use them at all when result can be near cheat like things(he has a skill which allow him to absorb skill of others and he visits different worlds like marvel , fate , Godzilla, mass effect etc and do not use it , he also has ability to re write whole fucking DNA of any species he wants at his disposal ) 2 : pedophile and lolicon , borderline rapist.3 : There is no goal.4 : He is to casual about thing like introducing tech and magic into different world and acts like he want to collect girls as trofie from different world and bitches about when he gets a title: god of magical girl.5 : He kills all people in America when he marvel in the name of justice wile saying that since people pays taxes and vote for government which causes injustice they should all die. In mecha world he just saves Chinese people because the are good people let all people die because they are bad.Well you can enjoy this about 1000 chapters because i don't think there is too much racisms in starting and in starting when mc was not powerfully it could be considered good and skills he got from world had very epic potential (which he wasted ).In latter chapters racisms is full blown like killing westerns , Indian etc and pedophile , too op mc
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I really like this novel, but around chapter 160 the book turns from ‘the villainess and i her zombie’ to ‘the random side characters and their experiences that you dont care about’ and from then on you only get 2 chapters about the 2 mc. and other than that they dont even get mentioned.
Read to chapter 17.Terrible, just terrible... Info dumps and more dumps.This "personal style" is unreadable.BORING BORING BORING BORING
good novel for the first volume but after first volume the story become mess, some of paragraf from chapter in the first volume is exist in the chapter in the second volume
Warning for the limit free readers. So many inconsistencies. Turn off your brain when you read this…… . . . . … .… . . . . . . . . .… . . .
Of the 143 fully read qidian novels in my library, this might actually be my favorite, or at least top 3.It’s without a doubt the best cultivation novel I’ve read, and it’s quite refreshing in that it deviates so much from other cultivation novels. It truly has its own charm, and even though I love novels like Lord Xue Ying and desolate era, this slightly more slice of life and comedy style cultivation is often a more enjoyable read.The story might remind many of “the spiritual attainment of Ming He”, in that a lot of the same characters from Chinese mythology like nuwa, three pure ones and so on, but the novels style differs a lot.A great aspect to the novel is that it doesn’t only follow the MC, but also a lot of likable side characters. These characters are well written, have their own stories and personalities. You get vivid feelings for different characters, like his earnest master, his slightly clumsy and adorable junior sister, his scheming (in a fun way) uncle master, his unrestrained martial aunt, the icy but innermost fiery senior sister etc. You start to like and care for all these characters.So my conclusion is, try this story out, it’s great! If it doesn’t get picked, I might just have to read mtl, but I’d be extremely sad as it would feel like running this master piece of a novel.
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Wow! your book is amazing! Adventures is my favorite genre. I hope got to learn more about magics. Kinda excited to read more of this chapter. Keep it up the good work author!
A fcking asshole that has a dick for a brain, thats what I call the MC.I dont fcking care if you are starting a haremI dont fcking care if the female leads are plain dumb bitchesI dont fcking care about ur fcking plot armor eitherBut posing yourself as self-righteous guy that values faithfulness touched my fcking nerves. The story is overall good until the harem starts. Such a pity that a potentially good story was ruined by the author's hands