The deity of justice is certainly making things hard for him before dying completely.
Yeah people are actually reading ? and its a great story keep up the good work!
Too ludricous
All she could focus on was what she felt.
Been following this for quite awhile now, Enjoyed the slice of life music part. The magic system is a pretty cool idea, but overall it has a bit of a slow pace. The worst thing about this is def update speed. For probably over 6 months it's been 1 chapter a week, when it says 5. And for probably the last 2 months, we have had almost no chapters all month then 4 last day. Need a new translator if this series ever wants to be completed.
Over all absolutely loved the book. If you enjoy culitvation novels this one is a great one to get immersed in. Other than minor translation issues I personally think the ending felt rushed, but thats pretty common in these books. Now I just wish there was more.
Looking forward to where you take this story
is thair going to be a time skip soon like this volume or the next it will be interesting to see what plans he can make when he's not so weak and what domain he will open
Loved it! Really well developed and a fun read! Would recommend for anyone who wants an exciting sci fi novel to read. Thank you for posting it here!
I really loved the beginning of the story. I have currently added this book to my library, and I hope to be able to finish it! I honestly love it, but I felt like you could have used different pronouns instead of repeating Berry. I do get that's the character's name, and you're trying to state that, but I also felt it was kind of repetitive. I recommend changing those to different pronouns like he, she, him, or her. Whatever Berry identifies as. As far as the book, I can't wait to read more of it. Anyone who reads this comment, this book is well worth your time!
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okay NGL its a good novel but just to let you know in advance the MC got NTRed and the guy who NTRed him became his rival so idk what to say