This even if I don't want to, my subconsciously compared it to another masterpiece...But even then this is a good novel...though there's some development necessary which will come with time...so with little chapters now...I can say is this goes as I hope then this will be a super awesome novel...Thanks author ...keep it up...make it another masterpiece...
Dear god.... It is nice to finally stumble across a story that actually feels like a decently-written piece of work, rather than the eye-clawingly painful stuff I typically find on here. Fatty's obviously got some skill, and it shows. You can certainly do a lot worse on this site, and I highly recommend giving this one a shot.
Will we ever get an update? It's been 4 years and I've read all of your other work and am currently reading the updated chapters of MWS & DMR. There's still so much left and can't wait to read it! Hopefully we will get something soon.
this is good but how is it r-18 I haven't seen any mature content in any sort of ways or is it in the future that it'll happen ?
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this novel is better than other mindless system novels, but still need to improve character development, dont drop because you can improvecontinue posting
The story is comfortable to read, but there are a fair amount of grammar problems. We get a little snippet of most fight scenes and then the conclusion. I'd say the biggest issue is how every enemy is a total pushover. Someone shouldn't be able to give three full powered slashs before their higher leveled opponent could even react. Nearly every fight scene yet has such issues.
Translation is messed up but good character and story development all around ????????????????????????????????????????????????
For a new author, this book is quite intriguing, the story is good and the plot is strong, the synopsis is good along with the characters in the novel and the writing quality, but I cannot say much of the world background since the story is new but whoever reads this then I think you should give the novel a read. Overall the author is doing a good job so far, good luck.
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This novel is so bad I had to sign up and tell you how **** it is. I didn't get further than the first 150 chapters.Let me paraphrase the plot line: "Give me X amount of time and I will duel you to death and trample you under my sheer MC ness"The author loves this trope and uses it every time he introduces an opponent that the MC can't beat right now. In fact some of the major plot lines revolve around dueling people to the death since they slighted MC.MC is also reincarnated, which normally Authors use to make the MC more mature and wiser or cunning. This story's MC is neither of those and you would think his background as former mercenary would at least make him a good judge of character, but nope he has the IQ of an arrogant young master when meeting people.This story doesn't deserve a translation. I want to give this all 1 stars, but that would be unfair to the translators since they are not responsible for this abomination of fiction.