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This needs an editor. The story is interesting to me, but the writing quality is low. Edit the story for consistency, grammar, and spelling. Make an appendix with the power levels, so people can look a that before the chapter where the MC explains the power levels to her new students.Also the people other than the MC will need descriptions. Names, ages, gender and power levels are all that is discussed. In order to keep track of characters I need more than that to visualize them. Otherwise the names just blur together and I can't differentiate them.
Interesting concept, I like that. Well, I hope you would keep writing until the end. .....No less than 140 characters....No less than 140 characters...No less than 140 characters....
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The Grammer is a bit faulty however the story plot is very well developed. In start it will be boring but as you go further ch 20 you will really understand why this noval is one of the best I have ever read.
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It's good i hope it get picked up. honestly the story is really interesting with nonhuman heroines (weapons) yeah it is unique because the mc power is basically like turning weapons into girls. this is suit my taste
I know that literally everyone says this but I still feel the need to say it again :), but I usually don't write reviews for novels, I only write them for novels that I really enjoy or really good ones that I feel deserve more attention than they deserve. This novel fits both of those categories, so I'd strongly recommend it. Its about a necromancer but with a unique take on it.Grammar wise, I will occasionally see a word or two spelled wrong but other than that its great.
I don't really like this story. There are many reasons, but one of the more important ones is the lack of double-checking. The number of guilds in each continent was supposed to be 62, not 61.More importantly, the characters feel kind of bland. Sure, they express emotions and fit the most basic architypes and personalities, but there isn't much after that.Finally, this novel feels like a story that was thought of on the spot. The little details that allowed Zack to win the day felt less prominent when the author write something like this: 'Little did everyone know, there was a teeny-tiny itsy-bitsy little glitch that everyone overlooked and only Zack knew because he reincarnated, and that's (insert ex-machina).
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As someone who reads a couple of these on a regular basis, I feel you should get a fair warning of what you're getting into. These books are light reading of what are essentially power fantasies. The various arcs can roughly be broken down into1)Protagonist offends someone more powerful than him2)Protagonist powers up through training/luck3)Reaction chapters where everyone oohs and ahs over how amazing the protagonist is.It can be fun, it certainly scratches one of my itches, but from a literary standpoint these aren't that much better than something like twilight. Not to knock the authors too much, they're serving a specific audience and pumping out 5,000-10,000 words a day of quality writing is essentially impossible and some do quite well considering that fact. Anyway, if you're looking for fine Chinese fantasy this is not the place to go
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