Great work as usual. Loved every aspect of the story so far and the MC too. I am hoping to read on till the end and have high expectations from this banger.
Close attention to historical accuracy and realism indicating deep knowledge of author in soviet politics and military with a consistently built world. Also nice reference to Call of Duty world at war.
I like your story author.However, since his father's death you are showing how Ren is creating boundaries and "using" his friends, watching everything with indifference. I understand that after a close person's death people needs time to heal and all. But the idea of not having bonds because they are weakness and using everyone, always seeing things with indifference is soon going to be the same as literally 99% other fanfics where authors think that is somehow the best option. Without bonds soon the character will feel mechanical and like no emotional intelligence. It also wouldn't create hooks, tension while particularly tricky situations unfold. Forgive me if i seemed like ranting, but a lot of authors make their character cold, indifferent, dark, etc etc. and not always it makes sense. Especially here he felt love with his parents, had friends. Instead of weakness it could be shown as powerful motivation to not loose them and improve more. The other characters could also have significant growth, and together with Ren, could dunno have more impact than just some one man show. Just my opinion that can make the story more engaging and real. Nobody will become Madara level powerful by the time they are in early teens. You said so that realistic growth will be there. Rivalry, and helping each other grow is sorta more feasible than one dude becoming a mechanical machine and training non stop and using everyone to bis advantage for years until he feels ready to face the world, which can take decade and still me me tally sane. I jst wanted to convey my thoughts, as i wouldn't have bothered writing so much if i hadn't been hooked. The chapters of bonding and the subsequent couple chapter where Toshiro died and the funeral and all, how he said his mother doesn't need to be strong all the time, how his mother and father met, all these were really nice, i actually felt the emotions. In anycase, good luck with your story.
I really fill bad ?, because shen yuan is a good girl
Good start needs more updates but still a unique way to write a end of the world story
Have already collected this. Such an amazing story, jealous of the details placed on the world building, great character names especially Mirabelle and plot twists worthy of swiping up to continue.
The Emerald Algorithm is the best book I have ever read! It is so interesting and well made. I can clearly see how much effort the author has put into this book. Can’t wait for more books from him!
Can you update it quickly!!!!
Let me just say this once: this novel understands that food IS the love language. Every single scene revolves around eating, cooking, packing food to take home. And it's not accidental. Si Yueyue cooking those three dishes—radish meatballs, cold dressed cabbage, pickled vegetables—is the central symbolic act of the chapter. She hasn't cooked in months because she was pregnant and then recovering. But today, she stands in the kitchen and feeds an entire family. The sisters-in-law are raving about it. Zhou Guifen worries about the extravagance of using meat and eggs. But these are WILD eggs that Eldest Brother picked up—so there's this whole ecosystem of care happening, where everyone is providing what they can. The cold cabbage especially keeps coming back. It's mentioned multiple times, and every time someone tastes it, they're amazed. Why? Because it transforms something simple into something extraordinary. That's exactly what Si Yueyue has done with her life. She took a situation that should have destroyed her—widowed, raising two babies alone—and she made something beautiful out of it. And then there's the food being packed up at the end. Everyone takes leftovers home. The vegetarian dishes go first because nobody feels awkward about taking those. It's such a small detail but it speaks volumes about the era they're in—food is precious, waste is unthinkable, and sharing what you have is the highest form of community. The space Si Yueyue has—filled with jars of malted milk powder, rice, flour, cured meat—is another layer of this symbolism. It's her secret larder, her hidden abundance. She could have kept all of it for herself and her children. Instead, she's been quietly supporting Lei Zhenzhen's family, paying for things, making sure everyone is fed. The space represents her inner strength—something vast and hidden that she chooses to share rather than hoard.
I love this book a lot... Great start with good number of words for each chapters and the story development is just the way I love ? keep writing author! I'm waiting to read more ✨
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Love it so far. Creative abilities in a cultivation world setting. Like that loose ends get tied up at a reasonable pacing and nothing gets dragged out for hundreds of chapters. Heroines are sorta beautiful vases tho at this point (~60ch) hopefully as MC strengthens them they become more useful. MC is cunning but isnt a total scum…he’s I guess quite ruthless where necessary but isn’t a sly heartless scum as a typical villain would be. Give it a try its good