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the issue with this story is the author has good ideas but is incapable of seeing them through so what we get is him telling us what to feel as opposed to us feeling it by witnessing the events, this leads to Kiran being an aimless of going wherever with no sense of authority making him a pawn of wo
not great but not totally awful. meh.
Another good story in this series! Excited for the next one - nicely done author!!
very good read
amazing book please thinking of continueing the story
Cant wait for the next book. Loved the story
lovely, sweeeeeettttt loved it already , Bravo doll I have no proper words in your praises because I only know one thing loved it ,loved it and loved it
I hope some on read my book
Thank you author, I really enjoyed this book, more ink into your pen... God bless you
Loved this book! It was the perfect length. I have gotten to where I check the number of chapters before I start a book and this was one was well worth the read!
just nice read..
Romance is incredibly light. There is a bit with Isolde, primarily due to the red chalice cursing her, but that only lasts for that one arc, which is pretty short. I'm at the most recent chapter ~230 and there has been none since then. There will likely be more between them later, but I honestly doubt it's that deep.
