Loneclown
This book is extremely exciting. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters
There are many different things in the story ranging from worst to the best. Comedy, drama, action thrill suspence and many more. Beside the story line the author had also included the auxiliary volume which helps in better understanding of the characters and chapters.
great story plot lots of action scenes and the powers used by the characters buh......i wonder while it doesn't have a comic version I would love to see all the action this is one of the best fantasy novels I have read great work by the author
I like the new updated version of Heavens Clan ...
Another amazing story with an interesting and exciting storyline.Another amazing work from this brilliant author.Well done and keep up with the good work!
A novel that isn't an uninspired, banal bore? A rare find on this site. This isn't the most unique/original thing in the world but it does set itself apart from all the other stuff at least when it comes to having some potentially neat ideas.We've only got 20 chapters but I'm actually liking the chemistry our protagonists have with each other which is good because I think this is probably going to the biggest selling points of this novel. It's very early on so we haven't seen all that much interaction between them but I definitely see potential here, I am a sucker for when characters have fun chemistry.The worldbuilding isn't very original but it doesn't seem to be a complete copy paste of anything else either, the story is alright as far as Chinese novels go.My biggest gripe with this series is the generic antagonists and just how predictable they are. This is a kinda faceslappy novel and while it isn't unbearably so I can help but be annoyed every time I have to read whatever generic nonsense the mob/side characters spout out. Despite the significant flaws, I do think that this novel is fairly promising. I think the pros of this novel will substantially outweigh the cons in the long run so I'd be lying if I said I wasn't looking forward to reading more of this. 2.75/5.
Here is my assessmentThe plot was intriguing, but I'm not really into these kinds of books, so all I can really say about it is that it was good. However, the paragraphs were too long; try shortening them so that readers like me can read it easily. I've only read the first five chapters, can't read further, but I'll definitely add it to my library.
It seems that this is a good start of a novel to read.
the doge is actually going into the future to steal the future mc's powers. hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Hello you, yes you, the lost and curious readers who have stumbled or been guided here. This is my third novel and entree to WSA2022, so I welcome and thank all for the support this novel can get. This isn’t an official review of my novel so just treat it as a Q&A area. I’ll do my best to answer all of your questions (without spoilers)?
Deadass this book already has me crying and I'm only 4 chapters in even though that's the max as of now. Like I love everything about it other than the Grammer and the main character has me interested and cracking up with his "Luck
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The system idea in this novel is very cool and doesn’t seem too op at first. But it is op. But the character designs here what sucks.. the descriptions are just “she is pretty” and “nation toppling beauty” pretty vague. And the male descriptions er pretty nonexistent.
And this part is a personal pet peeve of mine but the females in this story are seemingly lambs up for slaughter and are suppressed in a man world. I would accept that **** if women just suck at fighting and cultivation but all women can cultivate perfectly well, bothers me that these chicks are just eye candy that can’t do jack **** themselves. Just seems as if the author is sexist or simply sucks at writing strong female characters. Then my second pet peeve, the mc’s whole revenge plot against the empress is fine but his grudge against his father is sooooooooooo forced. Than there is the mc’s step sister/future wife - I hate this bîtch. She is sooooooooooo useless and ultimately just gets all the trash items that the system pōops out. She does absolutely nothing to the plot!
And the reason why I still read this novel after all that, is because I think this system is a cool and seemingly a new idea/concept from regular systems in other novels. And also the translators have done a great job with this not gonna lie.
