Loneclown
Author why did you release 200 chapters in the first week you could have stretched them over 3-4 weeks instead since that would give your story more attention?
I did like this Novel and thought this has Potential.....but then there was chapter 20 and completely ruining the Novel becouse how out of character Mc is and how cringe it was
Good novel but ruined by the mtl englishDDDDdDDD
is the MC a M or S because the amount of abuse he takes for a girl that clearly shows no interest in him is appalling. And he takes years until he tells them that he is powerful. also no faceslapping
I haven't read it yet, but i know its great. Why ? Cuz i can feel it. I saw this novel last week and the first thing i noticed since then is the release rate, and its pretty cool. I'm gonna wait some more chapter to read, but i know i'll enjoy it. Keep the high release rate and i'm sure u'll reach something. Thanks. :D
I can't say much, It's good in it's own way but the quality of it's writing is quite a problem. The space between dialogue and narration is too tight, sometimes it makes me confused and lost.But the story is overally good, kudos to the author!
Such a different take on a world. This author normally writes about over powered heroes so it is nice to see a story about a hero starting at level one! Oh man the story is intense though! I feel so bad for the hero!
Something fresh with depth to explore. The environment is being developed in a manner that almost you can do the guess work and as the protagonist is also unaware and is trying to make sense of which is fascinating. It a fresh take and I'm expecting a lot from this novel
Very Nicely written, noce development , good character building , celever Transition from sciencd to magic or maybe a mixture :) all in all a good reading experience,
well I don't know what to say heheheh, first of all the story is good at the early chapters especially when he was op (not really) it's just that as the story continues just like what the author stated in the synopsis that don't apply common sense to the characters, like the MC's father who looked down on him because the 5yrs old mc is hiding something or should I say lying which what they said, after the MC's sister is born then becomes a legendary hero in which the father simply avoid the mc more like removing from his life for years then taught his daughter that she should feel superior because compared to her brother(mc) she is a hero, so yeah this novel have many bumps for me I guessed, however it might not be my cup of tea, but I recommend this novel to those who reads this kind of plot. I don't even know if you guys will understand my review heheheh (bad grammar).Oh right one last thing there are reviews here which are mostly fake accounts if you know what I mean try checking their profile they mostly reviewed only author's novels.
Gotta say not what I expected, I expected a kingdom building like RTW, but instead of trying to immerse the reader in this world, he keeps giving his opinion and history lessons, nearly 50% of it is this stuff, the actual story or plot is not immersive and author keeps monologuing and yet uses various rare units of measures to make it 'immersive'. Apparently mc has a system, but what it does, what it is, there is no explanation, mc just knows how to use the system(this part he doesn't monolog), I have not read a lot, so just a heads up.
Those of you, who want to enter h*ntai world for snu snu...... ??...Review : From synopsis, he's already OPI mean does he even need to live on earth, he can go to any anime world & get rich + immortality + girls..... It would be more interesting if he would be like Jarvis ( with no human body ) & we could see some challenges....now* let's hope it's not all wish fulfilment thingy.... So, let's see where it goes.... ????
