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I am quite impressed, one of the best cultivation novels out there.1. The MC is quite a character. The first few chapters show his gentle, caring nature then is slowly developing into something unique.2. The prologue gives us the worldview and seems quite interesting.3. The plot right from the start is quite a catch. It is trapping readers.4. The character dialogue feels so natural and I love it.5. It's only the beginning and the novel is showing shows much potential hope Author keeps up the good work.
Its better than other novels, just not by much. I find the MC obnoxious and his actions dont really make much sense. Theres quite a few tropes in this novel that i personally find extremely obnoxious, i.e MC goes nuts for random girl #7, the world building is alright, but nothing to fawn over, and the English is confusing but not hard to read. Overall its average, but as the author stated, this is their first novel so its to be expected. Pretty good for a first novel. Though, I will be dropping it because of the tropes. I personally cant stand them.
I didn’t realize they let litttle kids write here, the story is worse then invisble dragon. Avoid to save brain cells, or face becoming braindead like the author,
I just have to say this this is the best novel i have read on webnovel •cringe ❌•too much complicated words❌•writing quality?•story line?•plot?I really am inlove with the author's writing style you are a big inspiration for me ?
I'm not a fan of gaming but your book illustrates the settings, thoughts and emotions of the players all too well. It reminds me of The King's Avatar movie. I don't have background knowledge for gaming so reading the first part confuses me at first. But as I read on, it gets better and you depicted it well. Nice job author!
Interesting premise, what if the supernatural was or became real? Well that is exactly what our MC goes through. The pacing is quick but a little strange in the first chapters. A good horror story novel reminciestt of My House of Horror, and lacks a system, but certainly with its own cheat. I suggest reading up to chapter 10.
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If anyone is confused by this novel and the one that has Senior instead of Patriarch in it, it's because I moved it from the fan-fic section as I placed there by mistake. I thought that was the place for original novels to go.
these book is one of the best in a while .