Okay, I need to talk about the ENDING of this chapter. Gong Hengye literally runs back through a thunderstorm to find Wen Yue, heart pounding, elevator feels too slow, and then he crouches DOWN in front of her on the sofa and asks—wait for it—"Where exactly am I fierce?" IN THAT TONE. The one Cheng Yong'an pointed out earlier, the one that's "seemingly gentle." She literally just called him fierce and said he's terrifying and he's sitting there going "where??" like a genuinely confused puppy. I cannot. I am dead. This man is so done for and he doesn't even know it yet. But let's rewind because the emotional whiplash in this chapter is INSANE. He yells at her in the morning, calls her a fool, tells her to get out—cold, merciless, the whole thing. And then he can't stop thinking about her crouched by his desk like a little frog. He's annoyed that she's two-faced, then he's worried she's alone in a thunderstorm, then he's terrified she went to find her dead fiancé instead of hiding in his office where it's safe. The man is a walking contradiction and I am HERE for it. Cheng Yong'an's scene was everything though. "If one day, you discovered you were the male lead of a novel. You have a possibly beloved but already dead, very foolish little white flower white moonlight." Gong Hengye literally just... admitted it. No denial. No deflection. Just sat there pouring wine like a man who'd already accepted his fate. And then when Cheng Yong'an said "forget about this white moonlight and accept the female lead"—Gong Hengye's response was just... "Accept the female lead?" Like the mere concept is unbearable. Bro. You're already choosing. You just don't know it yet. The thunderstorm scene where he rushes back? "If Feng Yang hadn't been watching from behind, Ninth Brother might have already broken into a run." This is a man who built a billion-dollar empire from scratch, who doesn't flinch at losing hundred-billion-dollar contracts, sprinting through a storm because his ghost secretary is scared of thunder. The emotional stakes here are so high and so quietly devastating. She's dead. She's supposed to be gone. And yet she's the only thing that can make him lose his composure completely.
I really hope you endeavour to update the book from time to time?
Well this my first time writing a story and i feel like I'm doing a great job. Anyways please share your comments. Thanks for reading
the author of this novel really knows what they are doing. keep up the good work?
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Call me shameless, but I rate this novel 5 stars!! Of course, because it's my work.??? It’s still a WIP novel, but I’ll do my best to improve the novel as it’s my first time writing one! Thank you for your time, and please join me on this journey! ❤️❤️??
Nice book and awesome characters. Glued from the moment I read this first chapter?????so captivating and educating. am waiting for more chapters please.
Nice. Another story that only have 0 chapter.
Nice start,all words are well arranged i think you will be among the top 100 authors im the nearest future.keep it up buddy.
Okay so I just finished the 47th chapter.... And I'm not gonna lie this novel is extremely good and addictive, and I'm going to tell you why.Writing quality: the first 1-30 chapters have some minor grammatical errors And after 30 chapters the grammatical errors are becoming less in numbers. So over all: a little bit of errors here and there, but nothing too major.Updating stability: One chapter a day. But if it was up to me, I would prefer 12 chapter a day, that's how good the story is.Story development: not world breaking, but really, really fun. with some comedy here and there. It basically starts with the mc getting reincarnated into a ergo game that involves'capturing' woman and making them fall in love with the him. That includes: hes mother/sisters/aunt and many more. It's honestly very fun seeing him try hard and then get the fruits of his lobar.that's the basic premise. But don't misunderstand Of course there's a plot and a good one it that, it's not just about courting woman, but it's the focus of the story.Character design: pretty good, everyone has their own personalitie, but no character is really explored. So that's a shame, but hay I'm not going to complain.World background: the world actually feels Rich and with hidden lore. And I hope the writer can expand on it.( But the writer said he is just writing this for fun and Will drop it when he gets bored, so it's hes chose not mine ?)bonus category: the 's ex' is Good and has a lot of details.( There's no actual penetration UP to this point, just for play, and your going to know the reason if you read it.)Overall: a good novel for those that fancy some good 'se x' and a plot to go with it. Definitely one of my top 10. And a give it: 8.5/10 I highly recommend it to people.suggestions for the writer:1. Make the world a more mysterious Place.(add some folk lore that Will happen in the future or something. I recommend you read "reverend insanity" and get some inspiration for the world building, But add your own twist to it. Cause reverend insanity, is the king of world building and can give you some ideas on how to handle things.2. Add a little more depth to the characters.3. Expend on the blood line system and the original owners of them.4. You've got to work on hand to hand combat choreography. Because it feels a little underwhelming.And that's about it.Note: I know it might seem like I'm demanding or telling the author what to do. But I'm honestly so worried that this novel might become bad. Because it's so, so Goddamn hard to find a good novel with a promising future AND an author who actually listens to hes fans. And if I'm being harsh, it's actually from my love of this novel and wanting it to become number 1 on this site. Because if the author continuous on this road he will get big. Mark my wordsThank you for reading.?
There is no sense of overpower mc or a villain mc from reading this novel. I don’t recommend this scam.
One of the novel that I'm really curious at in this site. The storyline is very interesting and I'm really curious what Gabriel did before and Masha.Fighting to the author. ?