BertusSwanevelder
Perfect MC, Perfect Plot, Perfect Power System, Perfect powers, Perfectly Understandable plot-armour, Perfect writing.If I have to make out a flaw, it would be 2 things. First make the fights against worthy opponents more harder, I'm not saying that last minute plot Armour harder, but something that makes MC showcase all his abilities, skills, techniques better.Secondly please upload the novel FASTER. WE NEED MORE THAN 2 CHAPTERS PER WEEK, ATLEAST 7 CHAPTERS AUTHOR PLEASEEEEEER
"From the title alone, I knew I was in for something exciting — and you delivered. Keep up the amazing work!"
Where is the author I’m waiting for updates…
I will love to see how Rovan’s character evolves, and who is the mystery woman in green? It is a good read and I’m here for all the ride. I love that Rovan is up for anything life throws his way
thanks for the chapters, happy to read them
The scene where Grandfather Lu stumbles forward to check on Lu Qingqing and falls because he neglected his own injuries — I actually had to pause. Two lifetimes of separation, and the first thing he does is worry about HER. That's the kind of detail that makes family bonds in these novels hit different. And Lu Qingqing's response? She buries herself in crying, yes, but then she does something so clever — she writes on her grandfather's palm while the rest of the family plays along with the chaos. The author describes how Huang Ergou and Wei Guangming are fuming outside, thinking 'wasn't that a bit excessive?' Meanwhile, inside that room, a whole strategy session is happening through whispered notes and coordinated acting. What I love about Lu Qingqing is that she's not just cold and calculating — she genuinely loves her family. Her murderous intent toward the Wei family is real, but so is her tenderness when she's with Grandfather Lu. The contrast between the scorching hatred she feels for Wei Guangming and the softness she shows her family makes her feel like a real person, not just a revenge machine. She wants to save everyone, even as she plans to destroy her enemies.
I never thought I would enjoy a Mafia story but I took a chance on this one . I enjoyed it very much . Well written with twistt and turns. Weak to strong FL.
finally a good mafia book, come on author, write faster.
Very interesting. Captivated by the first few chapters
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I liked the story line from the start and I hope that author will be going to do better in future. But I thought that his blond friend is going to be like a enemy pretending to be friend but who know how the story is going to twist in future.
I hope the author comes back with some more chapters. By the time I got to the academy arc I was hooked.
