I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
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Great book, well-written story, excellent creativity and interesting plot. Chapters have the power to pull the readers attraction from the very beginning. The flow of the story is great, engaging, and easy to understand. Moreover, the writer has a unique way of writing and describing everything.
Good work for a novice writer. The novel has potential. It's just that the streams of events happen very quickly.The characters are well written. If the author continues to improve himself, I'm sure his future works will be outstanding. I hope the author doesn't lose his motivation.
interesting read! the first chapter is so adorable but then you get to be sucker punched with a heart wrenching death.. the first chapter for me was like a slowburn read but once you get past that the real stuff gets super interesting. kudos to the author and keep updating and posting new chapters! :)
The start of the story was something totally different and I loved it. I don't usually read fantasy stories but this one is good. Like real good. I've only read a couple of chapters and I'm already having a hard time trying to stop myself from reading all of it. The character and world design are unique. I can't wait for how all of this will unfold. Thank you so much for working hard!
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I think the story is developing pretty nicely, thanks to the commentors he now has grammarly and an editor, and is going back to revise his old chapters. I didn't even notice any grammar issues in the newest chapter, it was a pleasant surprise! Though he has pushed the update schedule from every other day to once a week, which makes me kind of sad.
The writing quality and development could be inproved updates need inprovment on background aswell as character design not bad cherten parts of the chapter could be vastlyinproved
First chapter is amazing, The protagonist is a God, Highly r.Ldkskw,wla!,ala,a,s,skalakjwmwkakakakwkw,laks,ska,ska
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Soooo much oH my god its sooo good. Please dont drop tHis webnovel. Please
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.