I rarely gave very low review but I need to do for this one.The MC is 5 years old female kindergarten kid.As of now, the father the Holy Emperor never shows his face yet and the netizens keep getting faceslapped themselves.The plot is repetitive and drag longer.
just here to claim free fp.
The character's design are the good point in the novel. Exactly Noah and his siblings. It gave me a feeling that they will be a strong person in the future. After that, the background also not bad. I guess the world that author wrote will be huge.
It's story does have potential but i'm at 100 chapter and so far I can say authors just wastes words to complete its little plot like we used do when we used to write essay on any topic and we don't know much about it so we go round and round around same point for one page same here but with each chapter at its so much frustrating with POV of each character of that event
I was immediately immersed in poor Seraphina's story. Looking forward to what would happen to her after the marriage. Keep updating, author.
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typical_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ meaning ~ just like every novel with the same theme and concept, this one is a bit messy or maybe just the translation or the way it is hard to distinguish ~ thoughts, systems or the verbal musings of the MC and characters around him.
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The rest of the chapters are available for reading on wuxia world or amazon. The mc’s character after the first arc didn’t grow at all and the only enjoyable part for me was the antagonists and schemers until the last 3 volumes where the story improved a lot, especially during the war with the gods.Other than that although the epilogue gave a happy closure to most of the characters at the sacrifice of the protag and left room for another adventure I would've been satisfied if the story gave him a conclusion.
The book is just too fascinating. I enjoyed your descriptions of each scene and unknowingly started picturing it. The way words were used was fascinating. I can only say that it is a piece of art.A good job, author
Me gusto que la perspectiva fuera de un monstro, que la de un humano(rencarnado), el entorno del escenario es bastante detallado aunque el enfoque del crecimiento es demasiado rápido, dejado de lado eso; en cuanto al núcleo mágico es demasiado ligero o sin restricciones a la magia, hubiera falto aptitudes de la magia. (Lagarto de fuego= Hielo?)