I haven't read a survival game, but I am giving this a try. The first three chapter, I liked it alot. I am saving this, as my first trial in survival game book.
a little to fast paced and seems a little forced to be honest but overall great
One word: Amazing .
How many chapters are part of hypnosis ?
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i love this story, somethings are unrealistic like the mc alone leave when he is just a child and learn football all around the world and then become a club owner and coach at 18but sincerely one of the best football i ever read the translation is really goodi hope he comes back with more chapters
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This book was interesting and amazing plot, but you should fix your cover, And I really need more chapter, it's intersting book i've ever read!
So I would like the readers to at least give my book a chance to take shape the same for thd characters , its real hard with you all only reading upto 50 and dropping and complaining , its over 1000 chapters the characters have lot of room to develop so calm down please
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
"C-come on Doc ..!" i got an eletric shock.
"Oh, yes, I've heard it from my friend."