天啓予報 - Reviews

I came here for a relax novel but turns out the author doesn't know how to continues the story and brings up competition and pet king war wtf??? The phone told him at the beginning that is just a game and will not force him to do anything dangerous, but 100 chapters later and the phone puts him right into the fire, wtf???And this Novel would have been better if it was placed in any other country because as far as I know the Chinese people are using the dogs to eat... and is disturbing when you think about it.I believe after the introduction of the pet king war, this novel would just turn like any other novels. My first bad review. Dissapointed.

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Just found this. If anyone is interested it's still being updated at Rosie's Translations, at chp 30 (actual chapter not this weird numbering) as of May.

if only there weren't so many mistakes with Grammer then maybe I could get myself to read more of this. sadly, Grammer is a major part for me and this story doesn't clear the bar.

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I love this story! I really recommend it! And I hope the author has time to finish the story!..........................................................

Hello everyone!! Don’t mind me, I am just another shameless Author who reviews her own works. I’d like to say thank you so much for picking up this story, may this accompany you in your lonesome days. And since I’m already becoming shameless here, might as well go all the way. I have another story entitled, “The Only Human Among the Beasts.” Unlike this novel, which was kind of mature, that was on the fluffier side. It will give you a daily dose of cuteness and a hint of heart-wrenching moments. It has a slow-burn romance too. If you enjoy this kind of story, then by any means, come on, don’t be shy. You can give it a try. Happy reading folks!!

The writing is great. The pacing could benefit from some improvement, but it’s mostly good.Story development however takes a toll on the writing. So far the story is a shallow description of her day-to-day activities. No much detail is presented besides a plain "she had some trouble, but overcame it".This also makes the character feel a bit shallow, because it limits the possibility of understanding and relating to her on a deeper level.World background is well done, considering the writing style and story depth. It’s enough to further explore and contextualize the world.It would be great to have more details on Emily's daily life.Keep up the good work, author!

Arcanine snorted disbelievingly in the background, not taking his eyes off Daisy. She was oddly fascinated with the infant. Was it because she had never seen a human baby before? She took in her scent again. No change from before. She still smelled remarkably mature for a newborn.

Uka was startled and turned around to see a young boy who was smiling foolishly at her. Then she looked around and saw that she was the first one to be found out. She then said in a grumpy tone, "How did you find me first? I was hidden in a good place."

I growled "the hokage betrayed you"