~Birth of a Legend - Reviews

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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

This review may change in the future, who knows. I'm only 15 chapters in.

I'm not gonna lie: the story is good and interesting. I love a good Reincarnation story. The characters are mildly interesting. At least I'm not seeing the cliche of every single character hating the MC for no good reason. There are a few grammar hiccups, but the writing style is good.

Now, the author doesn't seem to have a firm grip on updating. I suspect we'll be getting either 2 to 3 chapters a week, which is okay.

The pacing is a bit off. Some moments are rushed and others take too long. Luckily, there are not many of those scenes in the book.

As I said before, the characters are mildly interesting and they don't all seem to hate the MC. What hate he does get is entirely his own fault because he's a snarky twit.

The MC lived a bad life before, but the author doesn't try to shove this down our throats. They give us a bit of information, namely when the MC us moaning about the bad choices he made. I hope I see some growth in the future.

I think I'll write another one as the story progresses, to see if it gets better.

so far the novel is good
_the plot is promising that demonstrates that you  have a rich imagination
_i want to ask you is he going to become overpowered 'step by step' or 'fast' ?
_is there going to be harem ? in case there is one how many members?

Excelente desarrollo Eccxelente

nice story

overall good. but there are some unnecessary characters like Jeffery car driver in the beginning, Daniel or someome in Dimitri hotel. not sure what was the purpose of those characters.  Also Aidan had headache and neck pain and they identified that from video so what was that supposed to be?