Yuri Oneshots?? (X Reader) - Reviews

Sorry, about this but I feel like I have seen that image before, used in the cover. Dragon Raja uses it for a character called Anjou who can stop time. I think it is necessary to bring some attention to this, stealing art for monetary gain is wrong. I will remove this poor review once I have recieved a response from the Author or someone who knows if the image is under fair use. The story idea does seem cool though.

has high potential can't wait to see more

im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves

Extreme lack of descriptive scenes in the chapters (like fighting scenes)  and the protagonist is very dull. Gives no information about  the  world

The story is great and just only a few grammatical flaws along the way but it can practice. Also some usage of words and terms such as for example, the word "drug

Right, for some reason this situation reminded him of how Humans and Animals were no different from each other in various ways. Preys and Predators, almost like how Demons and Humans are no different either.

I'm spending all of these years

James's final act was to make sure he would survive. He wasn't sure James even knew he had set up the transfer. James didn't know if he would make it.

I hit the ground with the Cascoon crashing on top of me. I almost fell unconscious as I looked back at the Quest Log.

I know what I feel for her but my motive is not all clear. She is a year past twenty-six and Aunty Ada has been gracious enough not to follow the dictates of the deal signed by our fathers. In this whole thing I have played my part. But where does it all end and love come in?

Farren stared and looked at me like I had two heads. "So you have some stranger living in your apartment and you don't even know them?" I nodded, "Yup, doesn't sound like the big bad Naomi, does it?" He shakes his head fast. Before I could say anything my assistant popped her head in, "Maam your meeting with the candy bar is here, they're in the conference room." I nod "Thank you, Aaliyah, I'll be there in just a minute." I turn to Farren and gesture my head toward the door. He knew what it meant but sometimes he's a total idiot. "Scaddadle kid, let me know about the search, and damn it use your phone next time." I smile small but hugged him after I stood up.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?