Yumix; Unveiled [Vol2] - Reviews

I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...

author, are you ever gonna come back to this, or should I give up the thought? I've been waiting for at least nearly 3 years at the time of writing this. dated 10/26/2024

"I mean, can you please bring me some sweets like last time?" asked Dudley, sweating buckets. He hadn't forgotten how Harry single-handedly beaten up that group of bullies.

Keheningan langsung menyerbu. Raffi tahu, ini memang pertanyaan yang sangat sensitive, tapi dia harus berani menanyakannya. Dalam hati dia sudah bertekad untuk memperjelas keadaan. Kalau Farani masih menolak, dia akan mundur.

i like the world build of this novel at the start it explains every detail of the world origin

decent writing quality. so far so good, lots of potential. I'll save and maybe come back to it later once I find a few other books and make some room lol .

i have been here since chapter 1 please dont drop this you have made an amazing story and if yoh plan on dropping just make an ending dont blue ball us please

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Good story here I am really liking it. Nice characters good story development and world background. The only problem is updates don't come fast enough

Just keeps getting better and better. All ur books are great author

So... Where should I begin? The story looks interesting and I notice that the author did try describing the characters and the setting so we, readers, could imagine it. The problem with this was that the author over-described (if that's a word) both things. It made the story confusing instead of making it clear. The second thing is punctuation and grammar. There are too many run-off sentences while describing the characters. Use periods and commas. They are your friends. Also, use a grammar corrector program like Grammarly or just write your draft in MS Word so it corrects the mistakes before you post the story. Remember, good grammar can captivate the audience in this sea of stories. I do think that with a bit of polishing and editing, your story could go far.

"And Saki's room will be yours soon. She is moving out in a few days back to our parents." He would smile, politely. "Saki moved out here for a bit because she missed me."