You’re The Baby’s Father ? - Reviews

Such a profound cover it ...it gives us the insite on how a normal fish jumps over the waterfall and becomes a dragon!!!              ???  ☁️⛅☁️☁️ ???  ????u200d♂️?u200d♀️??

Nice story l must say.....I also liked the author's writting skill more....Its an interesting one and also a very good plot....Keep going author...l am seeing a great future ahead of urs....

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The story seemed interesting until you read a few sentences. Don't know if English isn't the author's first language. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes, broken paragraphs or sentences, even chapters are painstakingly short, which doesn't even progress the story or add substance in some way. I'd recommend reading other works to see how they structure or outline their stories.

Story seems like an interesting fantasy plot, really enjoy!

Yi Long charges forth, he then jumps and elbowed the one blocking him.

I looked at the floor next to my desk. Pink eraser chunks were littered all over the floor.

  Li na watch him walk toward the sitting room,that was when she realized something wrong,he was walking toward his fridge, hey kang that not the bath room li na shouted with her face red,

"Karin, what happened?" He asked

     As Jeremy opened his eyes, he noticed he was in a chair and front of him was someone sitting at a desk with two doors on each of their sides.

"Level 10..." says the robed man with a tinge of disappointment in his voice.