You're not my mother - Reviews

Very intriguing till the end. ...️...️...️...️

Ok .. this novel make me so hungry as those customer ... I myself is someone who love to cook food myself and eat it so this novel has now become my weakness... every time I read chapter I feel like go to kitchen cook a dish and eat it.

I really like the story!Keep up the good work. Tbh I wish there were more novel like this..……………..........................................

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The MC is powerful so why is he not showing it off to his relatives even when is underestimated all the time .................................................

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This is a great Novel with a good plot with an amazing world background. The only thing is that needs to be improved in this novel is the writing quality which I will give a few suggestions. There are many grammatical mistakes such as mixing the genders, mixing the past tense and present tense, mixing the point of view of the 1st person and 3rd person, and finally there are a few areas where the wording could be more clear and concise. If you are reading this review, please keep reading! These are mistakes that could be overlooked due to how great this novel has developed!

Rias: Okay

Advert remember he didn't appraisal the pistol yet so he thought 'Magic Flare Pistol'. The pump gun he holds break into a piece and scattered around before a pistol materialized to his hand.

every chapter is boring.  to the writer, can you please write a better story? Please come up with a better one. This line of story is not worth our time

"Well aren't I ,anyway you should be careful not to tell others about your identity and don't create a fuss "Xiao lin says with sitting in her office located at headquarter  of UG.

Got all my vote!!