Yorktun - Reviews

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When are the new chapters due released? Translators said they would start releasing by the end of November 2020 but we are almost in February 2021 they still did not release any more chapters.There literally are not any new chapters for about 6-7 months now. All we want from translators is just an announcement, whether you will continue translating this or not?

It happens to be 9:26 AM when I'm writing this. I realized I had 8 reviews and that I can write another review at 11:00 AM where I am and will have ten reviews. I'm giving myself 5 stars because it's faster, and it will also increase my rating. This story deserves a high rating because I worked on it! Every author feels the same way! Give us all 5 stars please! hahahaha! In an hour, I will have 10 reviews! Then the spell of 10 reviews will be complete and you can see my rating!

Sorry to be so mean for my first review but I want the author to take conscience that his story is event more chidlish than my little poney. The mc has only one setbacks that he forgets in the first ten chapters that is his wife’s betrayal although the author could have used this to give the mc a more complex personality than «i love everyone, everyone is beautiful come with me pluck flower». He could have used this to create a more complex relationship with lu and his friends. Like he doesn’t trust any women and is a perfect bastards until he finds the female lead.The character of the stories are either here to help the mc either... Sorry there is only this sort of character.The mc is born :Rich (check)In a lovely family (check, btw i love you lu)With true friens (check)With insane luck (check, if one day he goes in a forest i expect him to at least found a unicorn)The things with stories with a system is that it makes all too easy there are no exterior problems that the mc won’t be able to take care of. So please create some real problem.

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Read up to chapter 43. Horrible novel!! MC is a shut-in coward otaku. Supposedly well read in cultivation novels but is an idiot when and even more a coward when knowing that he transmigrated into a powerful body with a system. Can not relate or comprehend the MC’s character or personality. It’s just tooooooo retarded and annoying. Waste of time

haven’ even read it but i saw yandere so already 5 star but is there actually any yandere, just looking at the chapter tittles i don’t see any signs of yanderes

Curious to see where the mc goes from here...will happily wait for new chapters, just hope to see even more uses of his system for devious reasons

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So, how do I start? This novel is written quite nicely, even though there are a few improvements that can be done. Nevertheless, this writer has never ceased to put more and more effort in his novels. Can’t wait to see what happens next for this one.

Good novel. But not 5 stars, I would say I find somethings which I feel don't make sense but well I ain't the author and well as long as he is satisfied.

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