Y/n Diaz, the new rookie - Reviews

Good book! The start is somewhat plain but it has the perfect elements to hook readers. Give it a go, readers. The cute demon is a cutie, you'll love it!

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Gave it a 3 all around because it locks to early to really get a feel for the story. Also once i started reading the raw novel the names and a few other things are slightly different.

it's trash. I read this novel in mtlnovel.com couple months back. I liked the start but I dropped it even before reaching chapter 100. although I don't remember why but since it's something I dropped then it must have been trash.

Early in the development yet much better then 99,9% of the novels in here. Would recommend to anyone who likes the related tags of ‘game world’, ‘adventure’ and the others. Characters are individuals and not lifeless bag of filling. Writing quality is great and the story is far from the cliches past the first two chapters.

Okay so I really like Gourmet of Another world type stories and from the summary I thought that the mc would be feeding literal ghosts on the side, ya know, like a supernatural horror cooking thing in modern times. Spoiler. It’s not. Very sad. Anyway the story is pretty much placed in a Food Wars parody. Which is sort of cringe in my opinion. They use the same characters and stuff like the school and gourmet associations etc. The MC (a bit like Soma from Foodwars) has a small family restaurant run by his gramps- except the old man literally didn’t teach him how to cook until like a day after he got his cooking system. The cooking system is pretty straightforward- be the best- and it seems a lot more versatile and useful than some other systems but not too OP. Unlike Food Wars MC doesn’t want to go to the fancy cook school and just wants to run the restaurant. I quite like MC’s personality which is far more active than Bu Fang’s from Gourmet of Another World. He seems more positive and it’s clear that he’s quite hardworking. I’ve read more than I thought I would because I don’t mind seeing his journey as a chef but... the Food Wars references which I thought was a fun easter egg at first became a full blown thing and I don’t know, it’s like meh to me. I’ll keep it around 4* since the pacing isn’t bad, the mc is like able enough, the cooking description is very good and if you can get over the food war thing overall it’s a good read to pass the time....I still want a supernatural cooking story in the modern world tho QAQ

A good start for another gaming fic.Grammar has minimal errors. Dialogue feels organic and prose flows natural. World building and characters are well flesged out as well.Keep on writing ?

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Shameless author review?! No. This is a sales pitch to you, the reader.You’re probably here for one of two reasons. Either you’re bored or are debating with yourself if you should read this novel or not. So I’ll be so kind as to solve all your problems right here and now. If you’re bored… just read the novel. It’ll cure your boredom, and it’s not like you have anything better to do anyway. Now that that’s out of the way, I will now be presenting why you should read this novel if you’re not sure yet. This story will make you sit down and stare at your device for so long that you forget where you are and how much time had passed by while you were absorbed by this novel. The only time you’ll even have the slightest clue of how much time you’ve spent reading is when your device runs out of battery or when you reach the latest chapter of this novel. Of course this is just me bragging so I’ll actually give you some statistics. If you’re sick of novels which randomly stop releasing chapters, this novel is the one for you. 180 chapters have already been stockpiled and 2 of them will be released every day. This is my second “proper” novel so I do hope that you give it a try since I’ve learned a lot from the mistakes I’ve made in my first one. I do have to say that I’m personally proud of the world building that went into this novel along with the memorable characters which all have important roles of their own. I believe I’ve made my case, so happy reading!

My guess is all the bad reviews are deleted, cause this is not great. It’ not a bad premise, but very definitely not small upgrades. The writing quality is grade school level, or non native English speaker level

duike opned it and he got super healed

XuanRong's face was full of worry as she stared at XuanFei who was on the verge of crying.