Xianxia: Tortoise  Longevity Art - Reviews

Rereview:

Story is a complete mess.. writing is so bad that it is hard to understand anything in the novel.. There are too many things that I'm unable to understand that the novel should be rewritten completely.. it is very bad novel

first impressions after reading the first  50 chapters. So far an interesting story about a man who 'accidentally' found a cultivation technique that allows him to live for a very long time. After a long time of cultivation and pushing earth technology to an higher from the shadows he is discovered by some powerful creatures who guide him to leave earth and go to a dimension where humans cultivate. He is 'guided' to join a sect and start his cultivation journey.

I like that the story is told in a different way than the cultivation stories from Chinese writers (different pacing, different starting point and route towards the furst cultivation steps, etc) while still being a cultivation story. It gives the story a fresh feeling (starting as sci-fi and changing into cultivation in a way not seen very often). What I also like is that although the mc is starting out with the mc receiving all kinds of 'plot armor' and lucky encounters it is told in such a way that it is not just luck that will make the mc strong, he earns it with smart choices. And on this platform one of the best things I could say is that so far I haven't seen an 'idiotic young master' type of character (I hate those characters bc they often get themselves and their family killed for the dumbest of reasons. They are called cannon fodder for a reason but more often than not it doesn't do the image of the mc in the eyes of the reader much good. An antagonist who acts out of logical reasoning make the main character look better when he defeats them)
Not everything is great but so far I have only found minor things and not things like where the story and character development breaks world building. Think of things like sound in space, small mistakes that are also often made in movies and animation. And another thing that sometimes can be better is the distinction between narrator and character. When is the narrator talking about the mc, when is the narrator talking in general. In other words small things that could often be fixed with a slight restructuring of some sentences or paragraphs.

The story is interesting, plays out in an interesting world and told in an entertaining way. I hope it can hold this energy in later chapters too.

while the book is good, is this a translated Chinese book?, I can see a lot of subtle communistic views being portrayed

Pretty good so far.  I like the concept of an Immortal faction. Certain parts can be kind of confusing but overall a good read.

Hey Vsauce, Micheal here. Our MC's journey is a coincidence. Or is it?

To an experienced authors, I want some advice for creating a novel. How many word counts do I have to achieve in each chapter? Do I have to start in building my characters growth? Advice in having better world building development? Something like that. This is a respectful request, I want to create my own novel that both of us can enjoy.I am creating as a way for my passion to be a writer and what's better than to ask you guys. I am thankful for your kind thoughts in answering my concerns. Hope you have a good day fellow readers and authors.

This novel is legendary please continue to update

Well the idea is unique and future looks promising but we didn't get to see any of his past experience so he kind of feels withdrawn from the world...Maybe add some potential partner in the later story.. overall great writing

The start was great but he slowly loses his character and the story development becomes weird and un-understandable. Slowly I feel like his goal is not to be immortal it's weird he has a disciple or love interest I don't understand what's going on.

In my new work on the pursuit of immortality by the main character, to the extent of venturing and investing in space exploration, when compared to other humans, what he lacks the most is not time. Please readers bear with any issues that might be related to word quality. Try my best, and please support this novel!

I must say this was a good read so far , looking forward to the new chapters that are to come. 



Its good to see a story where the MC isn't some young master who tries to get stronger for any reason like saving a girl or revenge. Also, not like a lot of the newer novels where MC is an evil being that goes around causing chaos.


 I believe, so far, this novel is going in the direction of a type of novel I have wanted to read but have yet to find , where MC just lives to improve himself while being able to live longer than others.


 I must say it would be good if MC could stay neutral and that we can just experience his life improving as well as his journeys through space and different worlds.


Keep up the good work!

Okay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Deserve some praise for this one. It seems you did not sleep while writing like the other one. Big up! Continue working hard and with this one we will be taking all the votes for you.